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Soft Meat
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- Like an oyster, hiding for too long -


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A soft bodied being,
you stood there, hiding.
Embracing algae,
- water-borne affection -
whose caresses you depended on.

And you let the waves rule,
voraciously taking in,
without filtering,
oceans of feelings,
good and bad.

But a three-chambered heart
that pumps colorless blood
needs bright love
and fears deep hurt.

Some would come to you,
wanting to possess
the luminous pearl
that grows inside.

Doesn't it hurt to know
that you are worth nothing,
only considered
for a tiny piece of you
that shines?

Still, I came to look for you
- on a reef -
ready to lose myself
in thousands of convolutions,
in the complex labyrinth
of your need for security.

I wasn't looking for a treasure,
I wasn't hungry for a delicacy,
I just wanted to be near you.
I guess fear did not allow you
to feel-think-love.

One day overcautious,
the next, pushed by the tides,
you ended up lying,
finally exposed.

A greedy shorebird
inserted its flattened bill
between your shells,
severed the adductor muscle
and took your life.


In a second, you became meat,
for you never had the guts
to choose.

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 Reviews of "Soft Meat"
Reviewed on October 13, 2007

Fine imagery and outstanding lexis make "Soft Meat" a composition poemized to impress, and poetized to glorify the history of Poetry.

Much gratitude to the author of "Soft Meat" for showing the world what to be a Poet means.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
I slammed my shell shut against that pain-full ending. Sad ending to an even sadder life. --Charlie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
creative metaphor and clever analogy ...

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
the title alone intrigued the heck out of me :}
i like this; as simplistic and observant and as metaphoric.....
pic is a wonderful touchpoint!
nessa

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Sensitive & deep run the oceans & emotions ~ love ~Ted

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Sometimes when we hide the beauty that's within, others never get to know the love that's contained inside,and like a shell that the waves toss to and fro on a beach of forgotten memories only this hard shell of our existence lies exposed.

Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Wow, Alixlea, this one is intense with meaning; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Spineless, he chose the coward's way out?


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