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The Trojan Horse
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- clairvoyance cannot be beaten -


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When the warmth of a kiss
is a bait that hides the cruelest
hook.


When the promise of better days
is nothing but kind persuasion into a trap,
followed by  punishment for having accepted
what came under the disguise of a gift.


When a hand gives
what the other is ready to take,
only to hurt and control,
desperate to invert
lifelong inferiority
that generates
            angry hunger,
            thirst unquenched.


War has not been declared.
It is insidious
It is poisonous
.


Like a malignant tumor
that contaminates healthy cells,
subterranean hurt unleashed
deserves a bitter end.


First, disbelief shakes
the foundations of her little world.
(To trust and discover insanity
Is a blow at one’s humanity.)
 
Then, anger swirls around
and quickens, ready to sting.
Until memories of a previous life
restore her weary soul.


As a descendant of the Trojans
- a survivor twice as strong -
she knows the shape of deceit,
and in the end,
turns the wooden horse
into a harmless-trivial-toy
.


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 Reviews of "The Trojan Horse"
Reviewed by Scott Tacke
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
All that can be said of this piece has been voiced by those before me. Powerful, honest, true.

Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
The child within, initially wide-eyed and trusting, so easily sliced and diced with deception; incredibly difficult to heal and rise again. But, ah, when she does ... "turns the wooden horse into a harmless-trivial-toy." Only one who has been there and learned the alchemy of transformation can write about it so beautifully. Wonderful, Axilea. Jerelyn

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 22, 2007
vivid substance to this poem ... i found this verse to be the crux of the poem, at least as far as how i relate to it ...



"Then, anger swirls around

and quickens, ready to sting.

Until memories of a previous life

restore her weary soul."



much is hidden when seemingly apparent ... the guise of purpose and being unfolds onto itself ...

Reviewed on November 22, 2007

From the opening lines to the last strophe, art and knowledge embraced wisdom to poetize "The Trojan Horse".

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 21, 2007
To conquer those fears we are faced with is a most rewarding challenge. Turning the Trojan horse of war into an insignificant play toy shows great spirit...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 21, 2007
Looking back through the mistakes of the past and knowing the wisdom and knowledge of the deceitfullness one can come across...it is the ability to see past the smoke screen of dishonesty which keeps one within the safety of reality...

a very nice work of thought...

enjoyed...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Truly inspirational. Yes,how we get taught the deceit so that we will see it coming better the next time. Thank Goodness there are good relationships out there. Yes, make that trojan horse into a toy. And I kept the t small for the reason being I don't want it to get big. Excellent poem. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
This touched me Axilea as I thought about spouses abused in a way that is not always punishable by law...verbal abuse. I have seen good men and women once happy, strong, intelligent and proud turned by this abuse into meek and tired shells of what they could have become.

fee

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Kathy and Charlie... there must be a long-distance connection going
on.

When writing this "sort of poem thing", I had this image in mind. Wood, the fake warmth of a kiss... naturally, the con artist should end up doing something "real", something "useful" just for once.

Heartless behavior and exploitation of someone else's presence, qualities, empathy, real-life experience, with the sudden twist of denigrating, manipulating, devaluing what he's been after, what he has taken as a source of motivation, as life to brighten up his dead pale skin... it would be too easy to get away with it. Hatred that only comes out of jealousy, of an old feeling of inferiority, can only be pushed back. And if the pathetic (but mean) perpetrator falls into the flames, the warmth will be real... at last.
Although I'd say... beware of the toxic fumes.

Thank you for your insightful and friendly comments. They are precious.

Axilea

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
poignant read

Reviewed on November 20, 2007
This is thought provoking excellence, Axilea, the chaotic dance of two trying to be one. Anything can be the Trojan horse: lack of communication was mine and my ex husband's. When we'd communicate, it was through arguing...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
I loved Kathy's idea with the log. I do love a good bon-fire. Roasted mallo's--crispy tan. Yummmmminess--so sweet. Peace at last in the dancing flames. --Charlie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Life seems to be one long and lonesome tale of give and take, it is wonderful when both the giver and the taker are synchronized, but the other way is the normal . . .

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
I know the feeling,nice write,better days ahead,
stan

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
I, too, took my Trojan horse and re-shaped it. I used it for logs on the fireplace. It was then a true warmth.

God bless you. Kathy


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