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ROADKILL
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- see your own picture - (about the work of an artist)

There were animals
killed on the road
- thousands of them! -
rabbits, rats, frogs and ducks,
sheep, blackbirds, and a red fox.

She took pictures,
some in black and white,
others, with the lively colors
of death.

Pics that looked morbid
almost sick,
as her friends told her,
although fascinated
by her passion,
her silence,
her determination.

I saw her work
and thought of another word
- compassion -
as literally,
she suffered with them.

In blood, she felt courage,
in stillness, she found peace,
in their faded eyes,
she saw her neglected childhood,
in their brutal death,
and gaping wounds,
she discovered the energy of despair
and the will to fight back.

I'm sure she must have named them all.
She blew up the pictures and
still lives surrounded
with the many faces of
animal-- death.

I do not judge her,
she's like a scared squirrel.

And, when I look around,
the humans I see
are sometimes not so different
from roadkill.

We have all been involved
in hit-and-run accidents,
haven't we?

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 Reviews of "ROADKILL"
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Axilea,
This poem is so deeply written and profoundly touching!
My heart can feel the sadness and pain that is intermingled in this piece.
May life be lighter, peaceful, and more loving my dear friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Excellent images of death, puzzlement and devotion whirled together by a storm of childlike bewilderment. Good write.

Keith

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
I like this poem. 'She saw her neglected childhood in their brutal death' It is very nice. Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Axilea,

Very reflective write my friend. I'm sure their are many times one does feel like roadkill. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
some have indeed left their souls by the side of a forsaken road ...

scrupulously conceived poem ...

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
life is a sacred thing all life,I had my sons' dog die in my arms form a road kill,the road....
stan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Wise write that looks at the reality of life and people and how they are so much like those innocents who die only because they were in the wrong place at the wrong time...

Fee

Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Powerfully imaged and felt, Axilea--well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Yep. I know I put stage makeup over some scars that have been there since childhood. Tender spirits -- they're wounded so easily. --Charlie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Absolutely. I applaud this analogy and the work of this most sensitised artist. She's a brave woman. I can scarce bring myself to look at roadkill because it brings me face-to-face always with my own vulnerability and fragility. In some ways, it is like witnessing my own past deaths, as you infer in your final strophe - and, perhaps even unwittingly - the ways in which I may have been involved in the deaths of others. There is much in this seemingly "straightforward" poem, Axilea. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Kate xx

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Outstanding character and summation. In life we are like Roadkill and she....the bare witness to make it all seem immortal somehow!
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 6, 2007

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
The first time my dad took me driving I hit a dog!
I didn't kill it but took it to a vet.
It was just an unfortuate accident
But hit and run that's different.
And when it comes to birds and squirrels. . .
I guess I'm guilty.
Great next to last stanza.
Doug


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