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A Vision of Life's Geometry
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- images you keep -

Tree floating 
on uncertain waters, 
perfumed leaves 
drying in the sun, 
drifting like the afternoon. 
Then, sudden cuts - 
in a sequence that seemed unending - 
and the voyage becomes a staccato. 

These moments are not made 
of secret paradise 
and not made of private hell; 
just the bold encounter 
of vivid green 
and the deepest blue, 
like music, unspoiled 
that takes the living 
to different shores, 
unexplored paths 
suddenly lit up by an oil lamp. 
The wick burns 
so that eyes can see 
a nanosecond of life's geometry, 
although once the journey's over, 
the water hushes the crackling flame: 
"Quiet", it says, 
"Get ready for darkness, 
be prepared for the waterfall". 

Precious is the image that was once seen, 
now used to draw maps of endearment 
and write formulas for the secret alchemy 
of a new... 
brighter, more intimate story.


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 Reviews of "A Vision of Life's Geometry"
Reviewed by Joey Lawsin
Reviewed on August 14, 2008
If only human beings can protect and appreciate the beauty of our mother earth, more poems of this degree will always flourish for our future generations to cherish and embrace.

Reviewed by Joanna Leone
Reviewed on June 19, 2008
This is a masterpice! "Tree floating on uncertain waters", to me, is an example of life's journeys. Sometimes, I am on uncertain waters, but continue to float, or travel. Poems can be explained or interpreted differently. To me, the perfumed leaves dying in the sun can be the weariness, or being tired in our journey, and how our perfumed leaves can begin to die as we go through life.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Fascinating with several levels here. Searching. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
"...life's geometry."
"...maps of endearment."

Your marvelous, unique phrasing in "images you keep" leaves an impression.

Yes, because of this, I am now "...ready for darkness" and "prepared for the waterfall."

Love it!

Richard

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on December 11, 2007
"Precious is the image that was once seen,
now used to draw maps of endearment"
Not only do you incorporate vivid imagery, you have the courage to interpret it into more meaningful lines.
You have true power over word and reader alike.
Leo

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
conceptually, a quantum leap of perspective ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
Absolutely stunning write11

love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
The dreams we focus upon ends up subliminally being part of our everyday life. Your fulfillment wants glory and in today's mortal world we work like hell to get to it when no one, I believe, ever gets it all.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
There are so many thoughts and views of which one can immerse themselves within your work...this is one where we can find the escape into the eternity of more than life...even the moments are but a thought grasping thoughts...the brighter one is the one we wait upon...


extremely nice work...

enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed on December 9, 2007
Stunningly penned and imaged verse: well done, Axilea.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
I like the dreamy feel of this write,and of course your vision shared,
stan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
As always your works are riveting from beginning to end as you dwelve into the beauty and wonder of life living and love and see the many intrinsic little twists and turns that we all too often take for granted. Sweet indeed.

Fee

Reviewed by Willie Maartens
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
Wonderful words.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
Oh, the things that can be read in a brief, dull, flickering flame! This is how I behold life: Two steps in the light, a day's journey in the dark, but what I see in the light guides me on my journey. I'm glad she saw the light. I'll bet she makes it over the falls and finds that missing chemical -- spins herself a straw-room full of golden tapestries. --Charlie

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
Ah, any poem that has the word alchemy in it, is a poem for me! A Vision of Life's Geometry has a very Tantric slant. An offering of music and perfume, water, and leaves that make it nature's divine presence. Of course the metaphorical fire is an element that just has to be in this poetry...this reader is a worshipper of this poem's sensual world to be transformed and would like to venture on to a sequel, "a new...brighter, more intimate story"...do tell..be well always, Axilea...Blessed Be.

Warmly,
Sage

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
You have painted images of memory with a brush wrought of whispers...

Few can achieve this.

Keith


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