Passionate. My favorite line "because heartless is not human." The ability to move forward after betrayal is a testament to one's internal strength, courage and ability to forgive. At least that's what has helped me through many of life's storms.
Axilea - You have a talent of carrying the reader along with you on your journey of experience. Especially liked the determination to go on in spite of everything.
I try again:
a smile on the sails of me
a tear from the fruit of life
The human condition is expressed in these few lines. - David
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Wow wow wow! Magnifico!!!
Were it not for "Charlie"...I would not have discovered your marvelous talent.
I wish I could speak my Italian as fluently as you surely must.
Betrayal happens as your words here say. The best part is once you realize there is betrayal thenturn that into a positive and call a spade a spade. You are richer for knowing. I always admire your poetry for the movement with passions.
Susan
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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God bless you. Kathy
I try again:
a smile on the sails of me
a tear from the fruit of life
The human condition is expressed in these few lines. - David
Were it not for "Charlie"...I would not have discovered your marvelous talent.
I wish I could speak my Italian as fluently as you surely must.
Fee
Georg
Susan