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MAGIC, White
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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The afternoon was resting
on a dirty dull wall
and she came in.
With a smile
and a plastic bag
thick, white
like space under a blanket -
white thick
you couldn't see through
her misty soul -
{teardrops from the night before
six months without seeing her
five-year-old daughter too
far to touch too
near to forget too}
Her hope is white
shining all over the place
cleaning agents as
rabbits out of a hat
a color changing magic wand
to change a room
cards - no tricks
only hard-working hands
blisters and brave eyes...

Exploited purity,
she came in
to do her white magic
that takes her nearer:
two hours
and
six minutes
closer
to her dreams

Her hope is white
shining all over the place  

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 Reviews of "MAGIC, White"
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Reviewed on April 23, 2008

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
Nice work Axilea, the separation of one from their own daugther surely must be a torture of which toils upon the soul...it is the magic we all wish for that brings us away from this sadness...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 17, 2008
White--hope and peace... the color that says so much with its light.

Your words drew me in and carried me through to the other side, lighter and more hope-filled than when I began...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
So sad to languish without your loved one. Sad. I hope your dreams come true. Liz

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Great poem I love it - Take care

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
I love the way you wrote this one..Very hopeful and beautiful in her own right..
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
The sadness echoes between the words like a call for help in a huge cavern that no one can answer. Sad but stunning...

Fee

Reviewed by Branch Isole (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
a blinding light of vision - bravo

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
This took my breath away-- literally. I held it through the end, hoping for her. That's a "white" knuckle ride.
I love that you wrote this poem, Axilea. I like that thought: that hope is a white light. --hard to even imagine what it's like to go through that-- child abduction-- even if you knew it was an ex spouse, unthinkable things happen. It's hard to know how anyone would act in such a time... terrible depression, hysteria, suicide... but boy! the courage it would take to smile, and just hope, and push it forward... incredible inner strength.

I'm breathing now. --Charlie

Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Axilea,

This is powerfully penned, wonderfully inspiring! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Axilea,

Time seems to pass so slowly when the hopes are so high. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Beautiful poem that inspires all who have such hopes.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
'Her hope is white
shining all over the place'...
Oh beautiful piece Axilea! Painfully and preciously so!
I hope her dream came...
Wonderful beginning too.
Love, Suzie :-D


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