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Fundamentally Different Stones
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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A church
and a garden
a brush
and chalky gravel
    My calligraphy -
    the light in my darkness
    black ink on the stone's whiteness -
A graveyard
in the smooth wind
the quiet beauty
of globe amaranths
    My elements -
    water from the shell-shaped fountain
    silky lotus skin unsullied by mud -
When words combine
I can see clearly - crystal clear
through the blur and blood,
clearer than you, my friend,
but what's the use for you?
Your writing mixes up
your elements poisoned yew,
yet you will stand up
                [only to be]
petrified by toxic certainties.


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 Reviews of "Fundamentally Different Stones"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Tempered anger and strength run through your words and you aren't going to take bull from anyone. Bravo. Liz

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 27, 2008
Great build and very strong concluding lines that really pack a punch, Axilea. Very unique and conceptually strong with some beautiful contrasting imagery and thoughts. In admiration, Kate xx

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
M a r v e l o u s images, fantabulous form. . .KUDOS !!!!! 'Pea'

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Things to ponder about! Lovely

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Axilea - Interesting contrast of people and monuments to them. I picture the serenity of the fountain eternally alive and the pride of the standing monument worn away by time. The imagery is profound. - David

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Interesting write and comparison.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
You have a style of writing that is truly beautiful. You paint incredible images for the mind to ponder.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
A language spun with careful thoughts, yet the message is loud and clear. Very nicely done! Love Holly

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Love your style of writing, very nice.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
foggy yet crystal clear...the different meanings swirl within my head as I read your beautifully penned words.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
This is a nice work...fitting the elements of comparison into a word process of demonstrative purpose and yet from within the stone there is the reality of difference even between stones...

very nice Axilea...


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Striking images although they seem to be blurred now and then by a fog or haze as if in a dream like spell. Enjoyed this one my friend and the passion it captures for your feelings.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
A fundamentalyy differnt kind of stone, and I wonder...what it would be in mine?.....when my heart was made of flint?

Georg

Reviewed by Cedric III
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
i really like the way you indent personal admissions in this piece. there is something about the way you have presented them that make them feel hushed... like whispered confessions almost.

your use of contrast is very effective.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Wondrous tweaking of elements in crystal _ evol .~. Ted

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
...light and darkness...your pen mixes elements...and somehow finds clarity...within shaded thoughts...
well done Axilea...
John

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
Your writing reminds me of Rumi... posing your question so!
I love the immediacy!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
I took a yew bow up,
and shot an arrow...
so sure of the aim was I,
that I had no need to look back--
to see its shaft poking out the middle
of the paper circles...

But she...
looking out of her bloody eyes
saw the shaft
and the circles
spreading out to infinity,
muddying what once was crystal-clear.

--Charlie



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