Healthy expression
with the rhythm of life
my lover tonight
told me untarnished words of magnesium
- particles that brighten up
burning in the air
with brilliant cave lights
of deep, deep love -
I thank him
and I thrive
for all that I give
and all that I take
my pockets full
with magenta tales
in bright print.
My past makes an appearance:
A picture in a white dress
iridescent silk
slightly wet under the moon
as I hold another's skull
until everyone sees
it was made of volcanic stone
- porous like a sponge
taking and taking
absorbing until
it could drink no more
drowning in its own dejection -
filth that I abandon
in a crater of despair.
With my elect
I step out while
heather and wings
cables and free screens
depict the forces of nature
and I smile
to my new lover.
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Reviewed by Miriam Dufer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
The complexity of the past and how it haubts us is great in this poem. The act of giving and taking is strong and brings out many questions. The vivid imagery takes me into the speakers world and embraces me.
I found this poem very psychoanalytic. I couldn't help but wonder whether your heart and mind are finally finished with this 'igneous skull' of an ex, or whether his hideous and distasteful appearance 'smack dab' in the middle of this reagaling of new found love, doesn't hint at the fact that those wounds are not yet healed. So to, the final smile --- is it one open in the knowledge that the past is finally reached a conclusion, or one of uncomfortable secrecy that you haven't yet let it go? Very open and honest read. There's much more here than meets the eye.
Lots and lots of colors in this one... flakes of silvery-reflecting words flickering in and out of all of them to give that metallic hue. There's bright magenta; white, iridescent silk--half wet (giving it a slightly purple tint); purplish scoria, or cinder; and the black-viole(n)t pit of doom, where the beastly ex-skull lies (a fitting descent); then again, the purple heather...
Fantasy, by Axilea Uzumcuoglu, in the key of Purple Major --gotta love it! I hope he's a keeper. --Charlie
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
wow Lucky Lover!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Very nicely done Axilea, this has almost a Wiccan feel to it or Gothic structure of sorts. ican envision a pagan ritual of love under a full moon with the sacrifice of perceived virginity the offering. Sorry imagination ran wild with it I guess but that is a good thing.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Wonderfully versed as you allow your heart to speak with such innocent honesty....
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Hugs Selene
Fantasy, by Axilea Uzumcuoglu, in the key of Purple Major --gotta love it! I hope he's a keeper. --Charlie
hugs
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
Blessings and love,
Susan
exquisitely
ness
The last stanza offers so much light-hearted hope and such a contrasting image...
Cryssa
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.