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Your Hand
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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Inspired by the work of Ferenc Cakò

A hand
    in the sand
of creativity -
Oh soft movements
how you vibrate to the sound
     of vital music
          vivid

 Strange:
Precision and waves
Soft focus
 (not vagueness)
a flow of you
on the screen
Uncovered

Your hand
Cleansing through the mud
of old life
    Covering    discovering
The light we fight for
Clarity that has to be
with acceptance of darkness
   Tamed
 by the will
            to live

Again
   and again
Wipe away
Tears and dust
Waves of bright
Brown and light
Creating
Redeeming
     Recovering

The beauty of life
             until the end
         Is to be
an eternal beginning

Recovering
   Discovering
Life
Again
     and again…
through the dunes of the living;
          Our living dunes



 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Your Hand"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
My favorite stanza is the second to the last...
I love the paradox of the truth of that statement.

Shifting and changing with the sands of life...great metaphor!

Cryssa

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
beautiful poem as you are

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
beautiful I love it :)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
This is beautiful...especailly the last two stanzas, for life, and even death... is about new beginnings.

Reviewed on May 11, 2008
So beautiful in imaged verse - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
I really like this-- seems I've been reading much about dunes lately... and sand, and new beginnings. But come to think of it, if life's an infinity loop-- never really beginning, never really ending, just stepping through veil after veil after veil, in a constant stage of becoming, then life is very much like a living dune-- covering tracks, filling our shoes, clinging crystal grains of memories powdering our clothes-- our eyes... and then the dune shifts, and voila-- a hidden treasure at your feet... I'm not familiar with Ferenc Cakò, but he moved my dune an inch via this poem. --Charlie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
Recoverying, discovering, continually. the world new and bright and shining rediscovered its beauty. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
I love the way this is so multi layered both in format and possible meanings. The hand could be interpreted it as the hand of God or even the spirit of humankind depending on your frame of mind at reading. Either way well written and defiantely somthing to think about.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
Like a breath of fresh air to finally be able to take the time to return to the den for a short break. Wonderfully relishing your poems this special day and honored to read such beautiful lines. Like the story of my life. Well Done! Deborah

Recovering
Discovering
Life
Again
and again…
through the dunes;
Our living dunes


Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
This is a beauty of raw intentions & shows allot .~. evol Ted


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