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Ad-Option
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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You were not born
when I met you yet
your long lashes pointed at
some place at the core of me

Before that moment
in the rose gold light of town
silent perplexity paved the dusty road
and we both walked side by side
even though you were not born yet
when you and I met

How can so many dreams arise
from a crack in the ceiling
saccade of the eye - oscillation of the soul
trembling wish awash - heart fixed on mending
while we were waiting
for the last snow to melt

Then walk again in spring or so
until the end of the road
when sarcasm pops out of a shell
and frozen phantoms evanesce
transforming moments before our eyes
so we soften

That other way we have of speaking
the one that floats like music and ghosts
and moves the dust-laden air…
That other way we have of having each other
and filling our pockets with life
now and then…

You came to me before I was born
a seismic dream in my room
shaking - shaken - door left ajar
then slowly opened to receive
an invitation to us

Late afternoon on a bench
the school building in strange quiet waits
with plumes of light in plane trees
the day ends on openness
my choice the moment I welcomed you



 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Ad-Option"
Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
Axilea - I like the way you frame this poem with:

You were not born
when I met you yet

and,

You came to me before I was born

Excellent way to express a relationship that exists beyond time.

- David

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
A time twisting brilliant work. Patrick

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
we create what is necessary for our fulfillment ... exceptional writing, Axilea ...

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
Hi Axilea, it reads as though a dream....very nicely done.
Blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
As though walking with you.

Ron

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 3, 2010
Very well written, Axilea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 2, 2010
Late afternoon on a bench
the school building in strange quiet waits
with plumes of light in plane trees
the day ends on openness
my choice the moment I welcomed you

Very fine and expressive verses, Axilea. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 2, 2010
I feel myself flicking moisture out of the corners of my eyes. I too was contemplating today the beauty of a little life that awakens you. You got me when you changed the words around..."you came to me before I was born". Magic. Whole Alley-Ways of Delicious Melding. --Charlie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 2, 2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 2, 2010
In a sense, some intrinsic ethereal in the thought of "...you were not born yet when you and I met..." like a passage, off hand, of a distracted poetess thinking aloud, don't caring about the deceitful mundane sounds around her.

Georg


Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 1, 2010
I like this departure from your usual style, Axilea, this more intimate, lyrical rendering...and I love the substance, too, the finding and understated celebration of inner compatabilitiy.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 1, 2010
I am in awe, this is indeed beautifully done and presented Axilea...enjoyed...
fee

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2010
Amazing piece of literature.

Reviewed by Sankar Sukumaran
Reviewed on May 1, 2010
Great!!!!!


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