A dead metal bat
an ugly rain-spider
a strange encounter
for him tonight
a strange encounter
with no protection
on the pavement lies
a dismembered umbrella
the rain fell on his face
the memory fell on his path
a strange encounter indeed
she used to be a tall bridge
a water bird licked by the rainy wind
his body followed the rhythm
of her remembered steps
self-assured like a ticking clock
wet hair sticking to her cheeks
his heart beating faster exploding
air blown into a wind instrument
that produces a subdued sound
while deep inside
the image shocks
a flash a tingling sensation
cruel devoid of hope
metal structure broken
evidence that he stumbled upon
lifeless bird with a dark-feathered crest
nothing to collect
not much to salvage
just pure emotion
on his graying path tonight---
Like John, I too have accessed the intensity of mood and emotion via the "dismembered umbrella" and the brittle bones of the lifeless bird, metal or otherwise. Our synaptic responses are evidence that we are more than clockwork, more than recycled salvage. The comparisons do indeed realease that "pure emotion". You are effortless in painting the surreal. xx
the images rise and pulse, catch a glint of light, and fall back into shadow. time is itself is unmoored from the clock, from the calendar, advancing and receding. just pure emotion--and sensation.
For me, Axilea, this work has a predominantly surreal quality and atmosphere, a dead discarded umbrella stripped to the ribs is the condition where our vulnerability is exposed and hope is gone.
THIS IS A TERRIFIC METAPHORIC WORK...THOUGHTS OF THOSE GRAY METAL BIRDS THAT ALWAYS SEEM TO SHOW UP...ESPECIALLY, WHEN IT RAINS. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Great imagery
most enjoyable reading
This is to keep and to read again and again.
I love it. -gene.
John
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A journey into unexpected pain here, full of serious and powerful imagery.
Blessings,
Christine
Missed you,
Peace, love and light,
Amber