Dying Cherry (in a cold, cold world) (poem) by Axilea MU on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 2, 2011

Yes; I think the problem is so vast that I often say that the whole world is out of control. Your words certainly reflect the problem, the tragedy. It is a tough love we must accept but maybe feel compelled to help it. Thanks Axilea, your abstract thought procss is refreshing.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on May 1, 2011

Relying on a man for security these days is like playing the lotto. I see the educational statistics, men vs. women. Women are advancing and men are collapsing. Who know why? Some sort of accountability gap I suspect. Not to mention most men are idiots. Patrick

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Axilea, Powerful words for what is
going on today and probably tomorrow.
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

This made me think of families... and how without strong family values our society becomes weaker and weaker. Each person looks out for himself/herself and there are few that invest in the future of tomorrow.
Thought provoking poetry...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on April 26, 2011

WOW! You don't tip toe on the frozen pond.
You take a sludge hammer to it.
Superb poetry!!

Reviewed by Michael Eads

Reviewed on April 25, 2011

There was preserved in her, the fresh miracle of surprise.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 25, 2011

Rivetting poem Axilea...where are the white blossoms? they fall as well..truly sad~

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 25, 2011

POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

You pose a lot to think about and draw conclusions from Axilea and as always your work is powerful and intense but so well done.
fee

Reviewed by Alan Abrams

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

you CAN break free, run, and leave the broken and dying to their struggles--those, who are beyond your help, regardless

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

To me, Axilea, it's no coincidence you chose
this particular time to post this work, a time
when suffering's remembered.

John

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

Powerful visuals here. Very mind opening and filled with truth.

Good to read you again, Axilea.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Frank Stein (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

Almost sounds like the online world today, so many people lost in virtual worlds of war games, friend collecting and social competition that we forget how to open the door, go outside and live our real lives. Many directions of thought on this one, well done !

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 23, 2011

That is a vivid and convincing picture of a cold world/life that you have painted with your words, Axilea. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 23, 2011

Wonderful!
Such a vivid feel to this, emotionally and physically.
Christine

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on April 23, 2011

Axilea, I love your way with words. You do paint
a cold cold world. -gene.