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Free to See
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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In the hermetic hours,
a painting hand she has
to wipe away the misunderstanding,
reveal the misery that can’t be told.
Brush held in trembling hands
a heavy brow, a heavier breath,
she floats, she is a traveler with a wish,
while the canvas is a sponge
to absorb the fog and sweat of years;
those days when nobody ever told her
that she had a painting hand.
Worries hang from the windows
to her heart and belly
and I am the finch on the sill:
the one that overflies

the messy vessel of her room,
that other stowaway,
the one who keeps an eye on her.
I record her movement as the expression
of a clandestine destiny.
My light feathers never burdened
by interest or fear, I am free to see
she has a painting hand.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Free to See"
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on June 11, 2011
The interplay between heaviness and lightness...superb. And the sadness that no one ever told her "she has a painting hand."

This is so insightful!!!

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 14, 2011
Enlightning and wonderful to be free to see others as they are and their "painting hand" or other treasures one has. Liz

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
It is so easy to be our own worst critic, then sometime the realization arrives from another perspective just how special our work can be. This is special, Axilea. Patrick

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2011
i love this poem! two beings juxtaposed in nature, surreal and visionary glimpse above and beyond. tremendous!!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
phew, Took my breath away on this one..The 'one' free at hand to observe just because, is the friend at hand~Paintings do talk if we take the time to absorb~
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
From the unseen to the seen, illuminated in your magnificent way!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
Free to See...such is he heart of uninhibted intimate poetry.
Beautifully crafted lines throughout, Axilea. -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
A truly wonderful write that captures the artistic extravagance of beauty the artist offers...
fee

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
Axilea, A very descriptive and metaphoric
poem...
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed on May 8, 2011
Enjoyed this piece which draws one into the pen.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
The objective, compassionate critic,
free of prejudice, is a rare bird indeed.
Here i'm watching with the observer a work unfold
in detail the artist may not be conscious of fully
and, luckily, my freedom of expression isn't compromised.
This is fine angle, Axilea, fine thinking.

John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 8, 2011
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 7, 2011
Feather-light, tender and deliciously full of assonance and alliteration. I especially liked "clandestine destiny" and the repeated h's and w's throughout the peace... (I did that on purpose). It's so breathy and whispery-confidential, and yet brimming full of confidence in the overseen. I would that I had an aviary full of such well-wishing song birds.

A beautiful poem. --Charlie

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on May 7, 2011
What a metaphoric masterpiece! I can see a bird in a glass cage in a museum of various painting. Some taken down -- some turned around. Some standing out -- some thrown out.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 7, 2011
What an interesting perspective you present as you introduce this character and her personality, Axilea. Well done! Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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