Kinetic Sculpture (poem) by Axilea MU on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2011

Axilea, Simply Beautiful!
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 5, 2011

Beautiful wording and imagery

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 5, 2011

"words in the wind"
driven by pulsating cosmic thoughts from afar?
engaging write, axilea.
best,
carolyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 4, 2011

The structure that you have chosen complements the theme of your poem, Axilea. You have given me much to think about; to reflect upon. To answer your question regarding my silly "poems," it is not a writing exercise but something that comes to me and urges me to play with words, which I have always loved to do. Thank you so much. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

One line leads to the next and opens wide as the petals of a rose, beautiful...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

This reminds me of that gorgeous poem by e.e.cummings, "i thank you god", especially in that last set of lines: "my stem, that particular day, that becoming>>>" The format of the poem fits perfectly into the theme: a structure of movement-- all that blown-about-windward (word?)-flowery moton. I love all the space between words and punctuation; it's become an extention of the movement, rather than a blunt end to it. And even the last word, "becoming" continues on with the mathematical equivalency of becoming ">>>". But most of all, I love the poem behind the poem-- the one of you becoming this fully-bloomed verb. --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

I enjoyed the format and the way you blended words into action while wrapping them in your garden of prose. Well done Axilea...
fee

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

Spontaneity in the moment is bliss, To just "be"is to move in the beautiful rhythm of life's free fall, moving in the direction that comes next without compromise, only instant acceptance.
This freedom may even be called love.

Very kewl, I love what you have done here Axilea, and more importantly, I love the fact that you know and shared this with us. sweeeeeeet

dan

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

A virtual bouquet of experience. Patrick

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

Uniquely worded and assembled
it's movement is like an invasion
Task force coming down from the universe.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

beautiful work poetess, tremendous!!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

Yes, like being grown by some completely mysterious force of nature...and there is such wonderful movement in your poem!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Alan Abrams

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

(En)lighten-ing
(as in illuminating, uplifting...)

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

...and how alive, Axilea, and energetic these words
become, the core of their source opens and gives
up and we have poetry that is felt, wrought, perfected.

John

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

Axilea........I feel the buzz of your words...nicely

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

I SUPPOSE ONE CAN FEEL LIKE THIS...WHEN EVOLVING. YES...ONE MAY FEEL THE 'PULL' OF ALL DIFFERENT TAUNT LINES, WHICH ARE COMPRISED OF YOUR ABILITIES, HOPES AND DREAMS. AND THOUGH THEY ARE COMPLETELY SEPARATE, YET, THEY BLEND INTO ONE AWESOME...YOU! A WONDERFUL WORK, ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 31, 2011

Great title, Axilea. I like the way you structured this poem.
Wonderful alliteration. Every line beautifully controlled.
In other words, I love the poem. -gene.