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Fly, Ash!
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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See, some cities rest in dust
quite dead bodies slowly merging
in tons of polluted sand
and faded spirits barely floating
in the gray air, like fly ash -

Time is filled with contaminants:
downside up, the old boy’s life
not liver-colored since love has gone
there’s resignation, there’s repetition
not so bad, not so bad
on the dark couch, one more stain
not so bad, could be worse
thoughts blur into soporific mantras
become prayers to mediocrity at dusk
when those cities rest in… -

With bruises almost inexistent
when darkness falls and lights are dim
in a container that could be labeled
and shipped to immobility
(not so bad), where he can drown
in isolation, slow deconstruction
gratitude kept, plus some submission
bruises barely visible to the conscience
behind soiled curtains,
behind soiled windows
behind the heavy veils of rain -

Some souls rest in the dust
of bodies with no intent:
limbs inhibited, skin that barely ages
doing nothing, heart just pumping in a cage
while the graveyard-city eats their dust.


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 Reviews of "Fly, Ash!"
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on August 26, 2011
There's a feel of sad hopelessness to this poem. Sometimes we just linger while time riots us out from the inside.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Reviewed on August 22, 2011
No intent, for sure. So sad they are our brothers and our sisters and now are the slaves of time's prison. They must wait fir the doors to open eons from now.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 18, 2011
Too true, we become--injest a bit what we constantly stare at, in this case, grey, decaying walls.

But by the same token, this poem reminds me of the little flicks I spent watching this spring about old ruins of ancient civilizations, once thriving, booming metropolises, like the islands in the Mediterranean Sea-- Crete and others, like ancient Rome, and Ephisus (and I'm sure I'm murdering the spelling on all of these), but my point is, even as we're just in the midst of booming economy (or our recent down-turns), we're sure to be nothing more than ruins eventually. What a waste of humanity if we don't escape our little cubicles and embrace life, knowledge, spirituality and each other. --Charlie

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Excellent imagery, Axilea, once again.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 15, 2011
when all the remaining ashes take to the wind all is lost ...

solemnly written ...

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 15, 2011
fly ash is the veil impeding truth, fostering creation of mantras established upon a base of whimsy -- some cope though overwhelmed with the pangs of apathetic ambition while others are consumed and overtaken by the grave -- truth reeks with the improbable aromas of life, the living dead and death-wafting mingled in the air to be consumed by the fly ash -- emotions float and embrace one another in this work Axilea -- my imagination is overloaded while my senses are honed with expectation -- I bid you love and peace my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 13, 2011
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
Truly a thought-inciting piece, Axilea... ...worthy of much more than a single reading. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
... some souls rest in the dust of bodies with no intent... strong lines like this one make this well worth reading a second time
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
This tugs at me, Axilea,
and draws me in several directions at once..
an uncomfortable feeling because it becomes
personal and is laced with mortality.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
This is eerie when I really absorb it all, did read it 3 times and got more out of each time..masterful!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
Marvelous is the truest sense of the word, Axilea. In addition to
the beauty, a marvelous intellect explodes in these lines. -gene.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 12, 2011
Fabulously written complexity within this Axilea, such brilliant and powerful imagery!
Blessings,
Christine


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