I didn't have enough vision,
I suppose it was just to small.
I thought I could visualize my thought,
but my imagination is not that tall.
I had planned and planned,
it was going to be so grand.
I just couldn't see past my nose,
and in my little structure it shows.
We bought a cute little pup,
and a little dog house went up.
As time went by, the dog grew much more,
now I am in trouble he can't get through the door.
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Reviews of "In my little structure it Shows"
Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
Delightful poem...I'm still smiling. I must say, that is the funkiest doghouse ever...and I mean that in the best possible way. Perhaps it comes in Large. JM
I've got one of those dogs too! His name is Hooch, a boxer bulldog who is the world's biggest baby, looks mean, but a softie...He outgrew his dog house as well, and quick. Loved the write, made me smile!
Blessings and happy new year!
Joyce Bowling
Puffy strays and something happens to make him decide he will never run away again. Judged "Outstanding" at the 2013 Writers Digest SPB Awards. Named among the best in family-friendly media, products and services 2019 by the Mom’s Choice Awards®.
Puffy strays and something happens to make him decide he will never run away again. Judged "Outstanding" at the 2013 Writers Digest SPB Awards. Named among the best in family-friendly media, products and services 2019 by the Mom’s Choice Awards®.
Happy New year
William
Blessings and happy new year!
Joyce Bowling