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Wishes
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Wishes


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I wish our pool was as large
As my neighbors
I wish my car was as fast
As the guy next to me

Now here is a funny news flash
Crazy man drives his
New very fast car into his new very big pool
And drowns

I wish people wouldn't wish
But I can not say that can I
People will wish all day long
When none come true pout and cry

There must be a good reason why
All wishes do not come true
The fairy's and angels might still be sleeping
Or God has more important things to do     

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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
A great write my friend, my first thoughts were the same as CJ's we should be careful what we wish for...because we just might get it! Sometimes what we want is not what's always best for us! Maybe if the neighbor hadn't had the fast car or the big pool, he'd still be around....I find it hard to hear people wishing for the weekend when it is only Tuesday or Thursday...don't they realize that they are wishing their life away? Enjoyed this creative write, puts a thought on one's mind!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 20, 2007
What else can i say but that your writing is just fabulous as you spill out what you feel and want to say. It was a pleasure to read fine work as yours and thanks for sharing this with us all here on the den.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
Dave,
Creative poetry. Maybe its good we don't always get our wishes.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
There must be a good reason why
All wishes do not come true
The fairy's and angels might still be sleeping
Or it's just God has the flu

Never thought of that!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
really clever-like the neighbor's drive to the pool!

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
They say we should all be careful of what we wish for ... we just might get our wish! This is a clever poem, Dave -- well done.
Love,
CJ


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