We were driving along the bay
My girl friend really needed a pee
I said go over that way
Squat down behind that tree
Coming form a very good family
Baby had never done it before
But she needed to go so badly
She nearly did it on the car floor
As she came out for behind the big tree
And stood in the long grass looking free
My darling looked so beautiful
Still pulling her pants up after the pee
All refreshed and joyful
She ran to hold me
Darling seemed so grateful
And all she did was pee
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Reviewed by Maalikaya C (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
Honey, you asked me make a comment about your poems, but
Cute!! I have a bladder about the size of a dime so I am an accomplished roadside pisser, but I used to be too shy to go. However the pain of a over-full bladder eventually became the greater force.
Take care,
Sherry
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I don’t have a single poetic cell in my body
But here goes!
“That doesn’t even look like the same tree”
I JUST LOVE YAH !!!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
God Bless
Michelle~
When you got to go, you got to go:) Excellent write!
Many blessings,
~Linda
Take care,
Sherry