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Take a Chance
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Take a Chance


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Another soul departs no one cried
Greed drives most never satisfied
Like wild cats nobody can tame
Look around we are all the same

Making the best of life always with pride
Should smile more emotions cannot hide
No time to give players play the game
Families gone now still hold the name

Maybe talking more and helping people by
Would make a difference did we even try
Can man change or is this to be a lie
In the confusion people hurt and cry

Look within there's no one else to blame
Please step forward hang your head in shame
Unlock the bolts that release the light from deep inside
Take a chance share the love imagine if everyone tried

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 Reviews of "Take a Chance"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
If only everyone really tried, this world would be a much happier place, well stated...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Maalikaya C (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Whoever this is sounds like someone - who feels alone; who has a thirst for love; that only in helping another would feel better about himself; who will take a chance to get ahead with no remorse or guilt.
Sharing love will just be hypocrisy - even he himself will find obscure. I don’t think this man would change without help. He would be too weak to fight this addiction of greed.
This is a sad one. No wonder why you don’t want me to read it.
No worries - you are still my one and only poet – This shows your versatility.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
"Imagine if everyone tried! this is a goal we poets keep screaming about. I know some are listening and to quit would cede to failure and no of us are built that way.
Thank you Dave for bolstering harmony.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
yes, just imagine the change we could have if everyone did indeed "try"


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