This poem is dedicated to Reyanna Sage Orey my beloved great-granddaughter
Life Is But The First Part
"Once upon a time" and "In the beginning"
Some famous stories begin.
For me, it was a self-abortion
That left me the surviving twin.
In a childhood besot with disease,
I suffered a sinner's abuse
Which provided me a foundation in life
To transcend without excuse.
So I left the nest and travelled afar
To settle and mingle alone.
I answered to no one but myself
And left it for God to atone.
In time a vision of love appeared
And cemented my heart to her soul.
I married the woman and raised our children
In a committed, responsible role.
I served the courts as an officer of law
Resolving people's fights,
And forty years later called it quits
To author my stories and writes.
Comes now my age of seventy-six
When I savor my works and deeds.
I kiss my great-granddaughter on the cheek
And harbor no further needs.
I've lived my life with God in my heart
And been forgiven my sin.
Now I'll paddle my canoe for a time or so
Till His voice calls out, "Come in!"
In faith I wait for the light to show
And the time I will rejoice:
Whence comes the day that God speaks out,
"Be still and hear my voice."
A certainty of future is mine
In His promise of the life I've led:
"You've done my will as I have asked
And heaven is just ahead."
"Once upon a time" and "In the beginning"
Will echo in my heart.
Soon I'll know of God's plan for us
For Life is but the first part!
So mote it be.
Richard Lee Orey
Copyright 2009
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Reviews of "Life Is But The First Part"
Reviewed by Richard Arrington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
This is a great poem, my wife and I both loved it very much. My wife and I endured the death of our first son (SIDs)and went through a period of grief that left us feeling empty inside. Our son can not be replaced but god blessed us with two more son's since his death. We could have dealt with this in other ways but we chose to serve god. My wife is a volunteer in the children's ministry of our church and I am a deacon and food ministry volunteer. We have been blessed as with my two books being published. I applaud you for enduring in a positive way and I am pleased to call you my friend.
R. Region Arrington
Author
" The Voyage of Billy Buckins"
" Tommy Hop the Bunny"
Richard, Such a wonderful poem. I truly enjoyed it; it is but tender and heart touching to say the least. What a blessing! Thank you for sharing. Sis "D"
Richard, this is a magnificent poem, though filled with heart wrenching pain, the faith and wisdom are uplifting and give
us hope...the recording is beautifully done,you have a great voice!
It's a beautiful review of your life, Richard. So many facets in 76 years, but this "is but the first part." I believe it was a rich life, and fulfilling, and it is a joy to read your telling of it.
I regret that I was unable to listen, but the reading alone is very rewarding.
Sincerely, Connie
Great work Richard...life is filled with gifts and joy for our pleasure, you show us the heart of a man who has walked the path of God and knows his journey even beyond the simpleness of this life. When one can see his next place within the bigger plan then he is closer to the love of His Creator. May you and your family be Blessed and may your children live long and fruitfull lives...
Oh Richard, I am speechless. I won't be if you will allow my neice and I to perform this work with drama and praise dance. God and His Glory in you get all the credit. This peice in my heart is "like God's first tree", in the beginning.
Richard- I can tell this came from a very personal and deep place.I like the line I have lived life with God in my heart. Such faith!This is wonderful. It really is!
Awww, Richard....This is such a sweet memoir of your life, one that has truly been lived well and in awe of the Lord's mercies.
The end of life is just the beginning.....amen to that! :)
Blessings...
~JDA
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Reviewed by Frances Webb (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2009
It was very beautiful and very true. Life Is But the First Part is the way every christain should look at their own life when a whole eternity awaits in heaven for us with God.
You could turn this poem into a resitation by putting words of music sung at the beginning and then at the end. It would be a great witness and touching message for everyone to hear. I really enjoyed it very much.
Richard,
This poem is so touching and inspiring, that it's no wonder you've already gotten so many reviews. I love writing that is directly from the soul, as this one.
I hope you and your family have a wonderful year.
Leann
Richard this is ahsolutely beautiful, and heart-touching write and vocal rendition.of your life's personal journey, lived well...the music complimented your reading.
I just retired after 35 years in Law Enforcement
Blessings, Carole~
Dear Richard. It has been a while since we last communicated.
"I answered to no one but myself, And left it for God to atone." These are beautiful words, how could someone say it any better? Your great grandchild is the best result, she is bursting with joy. This is also your reward and God's answer. Very touching poem a natural and powerful subject. God bless you my friend. Love Emile
So sorry I don't have speakers to hear that singing voice. But I'll take the word of these other reviewers and know it was great
I had to read the poem twice to absorb it, and wanted to do a good job of reviewing it. It is set in such a way that it rolls along with your life doings, and you have followed God's directions and seem to have lived a long life and a longer one yet to live. And you do know where you are going and can wait for it and be patient and meanwhile you have more of God's work to do here on earth too.
Just be yourself like you are in this poem and you will be strong.
Loved reading it and nice to hear from you again. Thanks.
Richard..this was truly beautiful...and so moving. An inspirational and autobiographical piece that tells your story and beliefs 'your way...
The lines "In time a vision of love appeared
And cemented my heart to her soul
was simply blissful...a woman's dream to read such words of herself...and her love..
I also like the way you have linked in references to past pieces..that worked so well. This really is a Masterpiece Richard...
On a lighter note, being English, your charming American accent, really had me spellbound!
Loved the music and graphics too...A 'forever gift' for your Great Granddaughter too...
Love, Diana
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2009
Blessed are those that can sing their stories with the winners' voice!
"Life Is But The First Part" sings to Faith, inspiring and showing
gratitude.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
R. Region Arrington
Author
" The Voyage of Billy Buckins"
" Tommy Hop the Bunny"
Regis
What a wonderful inspiring piece you have shared with us!!!...And God has rewarded you with a beautiful greatgranddaughter!!! I'm so happy for you!!!
Sending you and your family lots of love,
Sandie Angel :o)
us hope...the recording is beautifully done,you have a great voice!
Love,
Eileen
I regret that I was unable to listen, but the reading alone is very rewarding.
Sincerely, Connie
Peace and Love my friend...
Art Sun...
like yourself that teach us younger
and often times more foolish,
how to live a better and closer walk
with the One that makes all the
differance in life.
You, my dear friend can preach
to me anytime you feel called to.
You have earned my trust, my respect,
my love, and admiration.
All my best, love Holly
With Love,
Cindy
The end of life is just the beginning.....amen to that! :)
Blessings...
~JDA
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You could turn this poem into a resitation by putting words of music sung at the beginning and then at the end. It would be a great witness and touching message for everyone to hear. I really enjoyed it very much.
This poem is so touching and inspiring, that it's no wonder you've already gotten so many reviews. I love writing that is directly from the soul, as this one.
I hope you and your family have a wonderful year.
Leann
I just retired after 35 years in Law Enforcement
Blessings, Carole~
I enjoyed it very much.
Blessings, J'nia
"I answered to no one but myself, And left it for God to atone." These are beautiful words, how could someone say it any better? Your great grandchild is the best result, she is bursting with joy. This is also your reward and God's answer. Very touching poem a natural and powerful subject. God bless you my friend. Love Emile
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I had to read the poem twice to absorb it, and wanted to do a good job of reviewing it. It is set in such a way that it rolls along with your life doings, and you have followed God's directions and seem to have lived a long life and a longer one yet to live. And you do know where you are going and can wait for it and be patient and meanwhile you have more of God's work to do here on earth too.
Just be yourself like you are in this poem and you will be strong.
Loved reading it and nice to hear from you again. Thanks.
A treasure to keep!!
Love Tinka
The lines "In time a vision of love appeared
And cemented my heart to her soul
was simply blissful...a woman's dream to read such words of herself...and her love..
I also like the way you have linked in references to past pieces..that worked so well. This really is a Masterpiece Richard...
On a lighter note, being English, your charming American accent, really had me spellbound!
Loved the music and graphics too...A 'forever gift' for your Great Granddaughter too...
Love, Diana
"Life Is But The First Part" sings to Faith, inspiring and showing
gratitude.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU