Ah, sweet friend... I remember this delightful poem, as finely embroidered, with colours as soft and a thread as silken as the most delicate of medieval tapestries - yet, also as powerful. Absolutely beautiful!
{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}} and love,
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
I was always a sucker for the epic or mini epic, and this one fits in there somewhere. I feel your growth in this . . . Very good . . . Very damn good . . .
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
Dear Belle,
This is the kind of writing that holds the reader spellbound. What a marvelous work!
A deeply stirring epic romance. The passion and dedication in these lines moves the reader's heart from world to the next without missing a single lyrical beat. Lovely lines all.
I held my breath all the way to the end..my heart pulsating with a myriad of thoughts and feelings..
This is exceptional..I'm saving this one..Thankyou Belle!
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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my highest compliment to you La Bella
wish I wrote it!!!
good to read you again, the den has gotten sterile without your spice!
pax A
aka lady A
This kind of bites of the Romeo and Juliet type of romance in which, one could not bear to live without the other. I am not so noble, for I could not take my life even if I knew that my heart would ache for the rest of my days. Beautiful poem, LaBelle.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
Sad sad sad, a great romantic tail told in prosetry...
Falling to a rare sentinel illness and separated from her charges during a retrieval mission Xevera Nanay encounters the biggest threat to her survival but more importantly her autonomy when paramedic Michael Constantine recognizes and imprisons her
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{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}} and love,
Alexandra*
This is the kind of writing that holds the reader spellbound. What a marvelous work!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Aberjhani
You weave a compelling story of love in its most purest form; well done, my ((((friend))))!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I loved the story my friend. Nothing can keep two hearts apart when the love is pure. The ending was very spiritually gratifying.
Jill
This is exceptional..I'm saving this one..Thankyou Belle!
Vesna:)
Love Tinka
Regis
Peace,
Joselyn
so tender and full of love
tragic love always hits deeper than most
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
my highest compliment to you La Bella
wish I wrote it!!!
good to read you again, the den has gotten sterile without your spice!
pax A
aka lady A
Take care,
Sherry
We carry it with us always,Beautiful write
God Bless,
Michael
Rusty