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Night Train
By La Belle Rouge
The train swayed on and on
through the long black night.
Incessant click click click
becoming almost hypnotic.
She had a thing about trains.
With a sigh she nodded off to sleep,
bored with her book
tired of her life.
Private berth,aloneness,
it was all so surreal
and uneventful.....until
she woke to see him sitting
in the seat across from her.
His sensual eyes were electric
and they looked through hers
deep into the core of her soul.
Suddenly she was on fire.
She gave no thought at all
to consequences of discovery.
The element of danger driving
her passions to a fevered pitch.
Soon finding herself on his lap.
Lips locked, tongues tangoed
deep kisses left her breathless.
His large hands tender,gentle
but bold in their explorations.
A man practiced in the art of love.
Delicate hands wandered beneath
his knit shirt caressing hard muscle.
His fingers tangled themselves
in her hair pulling her head backwards.
lips trailing kisses of fire against
her neck and tops of her breasts
beneath her sheer silk blouse.
The night became a mêlée
of slipped buttons, sliding zippers
bare skin and body parts that slithered
over each other like coupling snakes
and fit together perfectly at last.
Was it hours? Was it days?
Time had no rule over tender touch,
no power in this jungle of lust
where two wild animals were un-caged.
It was her stop, after pulling on
her stockings, adjusting her blouse
she stood up to leave and pressing
her wet panties into his poetic hands
she bent down with a kiss of promise
whispered in his ear,“It was just like
I knew it would be, more than poetry.
same time next week?”
He pulled her back into the seat
and the train swayed on and on
through the long, black night
She had a thing about trains...and him.
Ooohh...So hot and inticing. Night train or trains can be so adventurous. Boring at times, but just around the next bend or car new life can come to life. You have really grabbed the essence of travel and what it can all bring. Bravo and a cold shower for me. lol. Liz
Amazing STory Poem!
I love it LaBelle, as I too- Love the coasting of the trains!
and the mystery of people coming and going...
I enjoyed this Choo Choo!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful Sheexooo
excellent erotica and passion, as well as train symbolism employed in this delightful poem ...
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2008
This was delightful La Belle. The mood was set, the scenery unveiled, and I could the characters so vividly. The mooth flowing tempo carried me along with the train and then...
Whew...I think I need a cigarette...
Just excellent!
Be well and be safe, always,
Mark D. Chevalier
Love this one, I too love trains and long distance travelling on them, although I always travelled either couch or box car. I always wondered what it would be like making love to abeautiful sexy woman in one of those sleepers with the motion of the train helping out along the way...
Well done now I have a pretty good idea,
hugs
Fee
LaBelle... did ou read my poem...HOT...oooh so HOT.... I based it on your works...hehe... I cannot to save my soul write erotic stuff..I turn puple with blush...which is dumb...but that's how I am.. so... I decided to try it... but it was about the weather... and funny... some thought it was about SEX... no one writes it like you... :-)) nice... lindalaw
Now, I want to take a train ride like that! Whew! Hot and sensually poetic, a mind blowing combination, Lady LaBelle! Thanks for warming up then Den!
~~~warm hugs
The train swinging back has a sexual rhythm to it. I've heard tales of travelers letting locked passion out to run wild while on the high seas on a Cruise Ship or in another country. Such trysts seem safe since these encounters seldom follow one home. Full of hot, sweaty, wet passion. I’ve always wanted to take a train trip across the country--America or Canada. It doesn’t matter which country. Now, my imagination is going to take some trips on its own. I hope I get to go along.
A search for the ghost of a chorus girl chorine haunting a costume designer’s Manhattan apartment leads to an encounter with an eccentric, mischievous witch with the ability to send folks back through time…in this case, the 1919 Ziegfeld Follies.
Georg
I love it LaBelle, as I too- Love the coasting of the trains!
and the mystery of people coming and going...
I enjoyed this Choo Choo!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful Sheexooo
STay Positive!
Whew...I think I need a cigarette...
Just excellent!
Be well and be safe, always,
Mark D. Chevalier
I am booking myself immediately
on the "Silver Streak" from Chicgo To L.A.
Love & peace be with you
William
John
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Well done now I have a pretty good idea,
hugs
Fee
fascinate (intrigue) me. What a way to escape into
one's self. I'm a sucker for trains. -gene.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
~~~warm hugs
Dee