Certainly an unexpected poetic turn! From a pastoral to a soul-wrenching drama that ends in a dream-edged verse that destroys any sense of time.
A major opus for sure...
Next time, michael
Inside the eyes of every boy soldier of WWII, deep in the eyes of the now seasoned soldiers of Korea and then, forever among the shadows of the war graduates of Nam...will be those screams from no man's land mixed with sorrows and the desperate need for love.
This poem The Night and the River sounds like Smetana's The Donau, tranquil at the beginning, telling the story until the furious end.
The authoress put me there, thanks.
LaBelle,
You've upped the intensity here, now great passion and the magic of love. I'm glad you decided to continue this as poetry because poetry it is.
"Tears sting his eyes for he can give them neither
I've have no balm to soothe his sorrows, save my love
for he has flown across the fields and dirt roads
to the one who holds his heart within her own."
Beautiful lines. You certainly know how to touch the emotions.
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A major opus for sure...
Next time, michael
This poem The Night and the River sounds like Smetana's The Donau, tranquil at the beginning, telling the story until the furious end.
The authoress put me there, thanks.
Georg
You've upped the intensity here, now great passion and the magic of love. I'm glad you decided to continue this as poetry because poetry it is.
John
I'LL HAVE GO READ PART 1.
DWB
Carole~
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I've have no balm to soothe his sorrows, save my love
for he has flown across the fields and dirt roads
to the one who holds his heart within her own."
Beautiful lines. You certainly know how to touch the emotions.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
my heart breaks anew
in a moment of silence
for all those who died. *never forget*
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)