You have described the foundation of a perfect, or at least near perfect, relationship. Beautifully told, I might add. A couple of passages are especially appealing to me...1) l have bloomed like a flower who has pushed her way through thick ice...and...2) when bitter dregs have finally settled and the alluring sweetness prevails. Belle, it doesn't get much better than that.
David
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Reviewed on June 15, 2016
Women who carry passion within their lives, will always have that passion. Your poem demonstrates that and so much more...
"a flower who has pushed her way through thick ice"
Amazing it is, the strength of determination.
Another lovely well crafted verse from the Massa.......
But the fires of passion are still there and flow easily from your pen.
I must comment on "mellow" wine. While I know it is supposed to be "heart healthy" I have trouble finding red wine mellow. The skins of the grapes that are used to create red wine bring with it their dust, mildew, and rust lending a flavor to the wine that I would describe as "musty." The only way I can get rid of that tangy, mildewy aftertaste is to drink white wine or drink enough wine so that my tastebuds start to indiscriminate and my brain becomes less inhibited. ;-)
Your poetry has mellowed like a fine wine with this beautiful metaphor.
And surely its bouquet will drift sweetly on the wings of time to be sipped by the lovers you enshrine here.
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David
Always,
Deborah
Amazing it is, the strength of determination.
Another lovely well crafted verse from the Massa.......
Walt
I must comment on "mellow" wine. While I know it is supposed to be "heart healthy" I have trouble finding red wine mellow. The skins of the grapes that are used to create red wine bring with it their dust, mildew, and rust lending a flavor to the wine that I would describe as "musty." The only way I can get rid of that tangy, mildewy aftertaste is to drink white wine or drink enough wine so that my tastebuds start to indiscriminate and my brain becomes less inhibited. ;-)
Ron
Sweetness prevails ever to the mellowed heart and soul.
Lovely and endearing write!
Lady Mary Ann
And surely its bouquet will drift sweetly on the wings of time to be sipped by the lovers you enshrine here.
I love the metaphor...
Diana...
we are aging perfectly, like fine wine
Would that all relationships would mature and age like fine wine. Lovely verses, Belle. Love and best wishes,
Regis