we all become a rock when we need to be, some of us are born one.
smileing at the world, she never cries. laughing out loud, dying inside helping people through thier petty existance if they had her life they'd die in an instant showing the world what they need her to be, she's dying alone because they fail to see. she gives them hope, and comforts thier fears she wrapps them in love and shes done it for years and at night when shes weiry, alone in her bed so many past images run through her head she tosses and turns but sleep doesn't come and she thinks how easy it is for some. with a pack of smokes and a glass of wine, another sleepless night thats just fine, just fine...
It's not fine, I understand the tossing and turning, having arthritis
throughout my body, at a young age of 47yrs.
Could be worse is all I think, as I ice and take Aleves 500milgr.
Crissy~
WE have to give to ourselves too, just come back!
We can't only think of others, time to ReST!
REmember If Mom is not happy- Noone is happy!
We are mirror and we reflect!
You're in my daily thoughts!
Happy EAster Blessings!
WRite on, and on and on(When you can)
This is quite a gem to treasure!
Hang In!
STay Positive!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
Some times we can get to much into helping others trying to save them and forget about ourself. I have been there done that. We cannot completly help others until we can help ourselves.
Good write.
Thanks Hugs Angela
It's amazing how one can smile and be dying inside. There are many who help others and do not ask for help themselves. I like how you ended this with "just fine" repeated. It's very telling. Good poem.
Brett
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Some people have fake smiles acting as though everything's fine,but on the inside they're really hurting,You brought out a point for us all to see,Thanks for sharing,Excellent write
Michael
Crissy, this poem speaks, no one knows the heart of another person and no one knows the torture some endures. Keeping those secrets locked inside can cause serious problems...we should find someone to share the pain.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
A tortured soul yet magnanimous. I suppose there are few people like your character. To give, never to receive and suffering at the same time. Most of us just whine and want more. Very effective poem. Victor
Your poem reminded me a little of a Simon & Garfunkel tune.
"A rock feels no pain and an island never cries." Also sounds alot like a Mom. A beginning of sorts never ends.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Flows just fine too, though the past is dun n dusted, it's atdemo we have to live, and reach out.
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throughout my body, at a young age of 47yrs.
Could be worse is all I think, as I ice and take Aleves 500milgr.
Crissy~
WE have to give to ourselves too, just come back!
We can't only think of others, time to ReST!
REmember If Mom is not happy- Noone is happy!
We are mirror and we reflect!
You're in my daily thoughts!
Happy EAster Blessings!
WRite on, and on and on(When you can)
This is quite a gem to treasure!
Hang In!
STay Positive!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
Regis
Good write.
Thanks Hugs Angela
Brett
Michael
Your poem reminded me a little of a Simon & Garfunkel tune.
"A rock feels no pain and an island never cries." Also sounds alot like a Mom. A beginning of sorts never ends.
Fine wine write...