I agree with Art Sun and Phillip, sometimes that "grey" area is exactly the right place to get the best view--the true view of self and world. A powerful message in a tiny verse. Everything may seem better in black and white, but nothing is ever truly that way. There are always shades of grey and that's as it should be. Otherwise life would be extremely boring. I love this piece. Thank you for sharing it.
Outstanding but you are not forgotten
As for obscured I personally don't think so
Your a beautiful young woman Who's
going through some storms,
As your friend I will keep you in my prayers
So you see you are not forgotten!!
Wishing you Love Peace and Happiness..Morning Star
Strong statement of soul and heart poured out sincerely as to how you feel but....
From reading your work the last little while and looking at your lovely picture obscurity is not a word I would use to describe you.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
interesting...
Art Sun...
George
As for obscured I personally don't think so
Your a beautiful young woman Who's
going through some storms,
As your friend I will keep you in my prayers
So you see you are not forgotten!!
Wishing you Love Peace and Happiness..Morning Star
From reading your work the last little while and looking at your lovely picture obscurity is not a word I would use to describe you.
hugs
Fee
Just my take on this.
Love and peace,
Regis
Brett