A well thought out write my friend, enjoyed this much. The enemy does seek to devour...it is his pleasure to see God's children fall, and he does his work in a cunning and conniving way...through what often appears to be innocent...but as we know looks are deceiving! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Excellent writing Bill, enjoyed the flow of reading your poem...Hugs and Love, Peggy
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
transcendent write; gripping and almost frightening pic. . .
inconclusive virtue. .. that just about defines us all i s'pose. .tremulous and intrepidating. . .but faith reveals and prevails. ..
well done~
ness
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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This piece holds some relevance for me.
Glad I found it.
Walt
Be safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce B.
inconclusive virtue. .. that just about defines us all i s'pose. .tremulous and intrepidating. . .but faith reveals and prevails. ..
well done~
ness
Regis