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FLUID FLAME
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FLUID FLAME


 


 


Fluid flame


Stoked melancholy


Dancing smiles


In her moonbeam eyes


Salty tear trickles


I close mine so tightly


Suffocating distance


Distressing


Quite depressing


Dull ache


Bitter thorn


Splits my childish heart


Familiar agony


Drooping shoulder blades


Delicious dream


Beyond social analysis


Sleepwalking


Arm in arm


Sentimental waltz


Alas


Reality


Pricks the veil of inspiration


Chimerical fancy


Another lonely night


 


 


© Bill Grimes Jr. 2007


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "FLUID FLAME"
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Lovely evocative title.

These short line breaks give a whole list of impressions, contrasts in the author's inner world, in the middle of his "lonely night".

Well done Bill...

Axilea

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Very beautiful writing sweet man..Hugssssssssss

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 4, 2007
In the fluid blue of the water, expectations can multiply.
I love the richness of the longing in your words. You read my mind in a lot of ways with this pen Bill.

Love,peace and harmony!
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 4, 2007
awwwe don't be lonely, dream on;-) Beautiful poem Bill!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 3, 2007
If only sweet dreams could come true, beautifully written...

Be safe,
Karen


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