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Whirlwind
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The air is greasy,
thick with humidity;
s t i l l n e s s rules the late
afternoon;
distant thunder rolls
with a lover's message;
preternatural
darkness falls ...
weather approaches.
The smell of ozone drifts
through open windows;
first raindrops
drum a song on the
roof, keeping time to the
passionate meter
we're feeling.
We make love to the
patterns of lightning and
thunder ... keeping time,
we create
our own storm ... after
the ride is over, we
will ride the whirlwind
back to Earth.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Whirlwind"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
most outstanding offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
I'll never view a thunderstorm the same way ever again, Karla; excellent and clever write! BRAVA; keep 'em coming! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Exquisite write!

Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Steamy and delicious Karla!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Riders on this storm...

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
In your well chosen words, you know reveal WHY you folks out there are having so many earth shattering storms and disturbances! Now, for gosh sake, slow down, and let those whilwinds settle down to only tornadoes. . .
Good job, here..... - Bill

Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Karla
A beautiful poem here, keep up the great work
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Ride that whirlwind, might be better than a rollercoaster...Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Superb poem Karla! Love the word usage!

eT

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Fun energy that you lasso with passion. I love a storm and a sultry drink of passion. Sexey verse here Karla.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
The masterlady of weather poetry strikes again with this eyeopening poem of the storm.

felix

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
exceptionally well written ... the storm within is microcosom of its outward splendor and fury ...

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Karla, this is one of your best, dear...Excellent..


xxxx dove

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
Karla
A very passionate and intense allegory of a striking thunderstorm from your accomplished pen...
Love and Harmony
Peter


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