Claim (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

I loved this sensual poem, write on and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Surely you marked your territory. Hot stuff

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Karla, my sweet...you've tatooed your love with this romantic pen.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

HUH, just the back bone? lol
Tasteful, or so I'm told. lol no you got me on a heated roll..

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

This one speaks for itself, witty also....
Peace Karla,

Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

ooh, I love this one!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

I see an analogy in this sizzling write, dear Karla, to a sculpture working His/her masterpiece. Such wells of passion you dip from today.

Smiles ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Karla,

You've said alot in such a short piece. Nice reading your poetry again.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

V E R Y W E L L D O N E !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

And what a claim it is, Karla-girl - E-U-R-E-K-A-!!!
So is your talent...pure GOLD.
Very tastefully done.

Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Short but concise romance that makes it clear the value of sensuality and passion to combine in joint ownership of each others hearts.

fee

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Very nice and romantic, with a little erotica to spice it up. One day maybe I will experience this too. Thank you for sharing Karla. :P

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Well well...a bit of erotica to heat my already way too hot Tuesday afternoon...lol Nice work Karla!

Myrna

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Hope you didn't leave any long lasting marks. My, my, fever pitch poem. Victor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Feelings that we love to share;-) oo la la ...Superb poem, sensuous Karla!

Eileen

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Oooo, Karla! I know just how you are feeling (wink). Lovely the way you've expressed it here.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Well now, Karla. You really fanned the flames with this one; give me a cold shower, quick! I am sweating bullets here! *whew!* Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Karla

Wow...excellent and sensuous hot piece that stirs the senses..
It's cold shower time..:)

Love

Peter