i clothe myself in your eyes, remembering your touch as it softly wrapp'd my shoulders; it will get me through today, but is is tonight i'm looking forward to...when you'll undress me and adorn me in pleasure.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman (10/11)
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Reviews of "Adornment"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
I have to agree with Lisa wholeheartedly, dear lady...
You have certainly "bloomed" over the years.
This is very nice...very nice!
Karla,
I think about the first time I read you, and compare it to now. Simply I can only say..there is no comparison. You've opened and bloomed into the perfect rose of poetry. I knew that first verse I read then..you were holding back a garden of words. Purposely keeping them from growth..I wasn't at all sure why..but it's been a great pleasure watching you unleash them..a pleasure and a wonderful journey you've let us all ride on.
Thank You Karla! Thank You so very much.
Lisa
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
I may be running a bit late got a couple of others before, before Dawn..lolo
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Karla, you new "dress' should be stupendous. Victor
Ok Karla, you're asking quite a bit from a guy. First you want to be clothed, then undressed, and finally adorned. Just teasing!!! This is beautiful, and oh so easily written. Bravo!!
Rusty
You have certainly "bloomed" over the years.
This is very nice...very nice!
I think about the first time I read you, and compare it to now. Simply I can only say..there is no comparison. You've opened and bloomed into the perfect rose of poetry. I knew that first verse I read then..you were holding back a garden of words. Purposely keeping them from growth..I wasn't at all sure why..but it's been a great pleasure watching you unleash them..a pleasure and a wonderful journey you've let us all ride on.
Thank You Karla! Thank You so very much.
Lisa
Love,
Susan
Myrna
God Bless
Michelle~
Susan
Rusty
Just the right amount of poem! Excellent touch!Brava!
Love,
Eileen
Well done!
Love,
CJ
Light & Peace,
Joselyn
A romantic "Adornment" glowing in poetic sublimity.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A sizzler to light up the Den tonite Karla
Have fun..LOL
Blessings
Peter
love Tinka
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
Fee
Have a fantastic evening, Karla!
Very artful poetry.
Love, Rhonda