... You know you undo me when you strip me naked, expose all to your caress - I melt like butter under the lightning of your touch - there - there - and there. Your heat fills me until there is nothing left but the shuddering climax ... the soothing rain quenches and settles the universe back in place.
(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/21)
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Excellent response to Eileen's challenge; glad you were inspired by such a gifted poetess; she inspires a lot of people here, including me. Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
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Well, you certainly know how to have a passionate time! Nice sensual poem..
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
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Gotta love it!!
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