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Tanka Six: Undressing
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Happy Birthday, Fee. :)

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman


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My lips unbuttoned
under yours undressing mine,
our clothes following -
any resolve I might have
had was tossed across the moon

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/18)
 
www.stormspinner.blogspot.com   

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 Reviews of "Tanka Six: Undressing"
Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Have my tankas had a bad (good) influence on you or have your tankas had a bad (good) influence on me? :)

Reviewed by L’ Anita
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Very Sexy Girl.... Loved it!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Delightfully sensual........M

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Karla--now that is the way to unwrap a gift.
Lovely present.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Is it Fee's Birthday? That man needs a three alarm cake like his passion.

I admire your pen here Karla. Thia one is a little spicey, I mean to tell ya!
blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Yahoooola mama! Nice work, Karla! Our sweet Fee ought to feel pretty special by now.. lol
Becca~

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Nice and spicy...love it!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Sweet, sweet sentiments, Karla. Short yet powerfully suggestive. I love it. Merci, mon amie. Amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Sheish! Karla - this is most sensual. What was the weather like while this was happening? LOL I'll bet Fee will truly enjoy this one. He's quite a fellow.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Wow! is it me, or is it getting warm in here? You done this up right for Fee's Birthday greeting, Karla!! Good one :o)

Micke

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Wow this is great Karla and I am sure Fee will appreciate it. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
A wonderful piece to pen for our friend. Lady J

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
You rockin the weather and the readers now;-) WTG
fine birthday gift for Fee!;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Splendid offering!!

Happy Birthday Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Que romantico!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
...the moons cheeks...are blushed...by the color of this pen.
you got it goin' on this time Karla...
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
But...not a G rated poem... my eyes are burning!
hee, hee..
cryssa

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
G-R-E-A-T writing...loved the sensuous style of this. Short but powerful!!!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Love it, love it, love it, Karla!!! Unbridled passion!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
I saw a cow jump over the moon, and while she was up there
that dirty dish ran off with some flirty spoon...

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Wow, the passion! --Charlie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Wow, Karla! Sensuous write!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Wow hot and sensual and yes this is what I said the other day...just another example of the wide range of talent you have available. Thank you so much for the birthday wishes as well.
hugs
Fee whoooooo wooo hot in here

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
I am with Mr Ed WOW
lol

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Be still my heart! Rebecca

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Karla, gotta love that picture, it seems to be saying "Was it good for you, it was good for me?"

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Switch off the light please...I am so shy!!!!
And please, be gentle...

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
WOW!

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Well, now, Karla!~ Feelin' a bit...mmm, shall we say "Frisky"??? MEOW!! LOL Excellently penned and illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
How romantic of a storm. Beautifully written. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
wow--steamy


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