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Thunderstruck
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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From, 'Why Things Burn,' (c) Daphne Gottlieb

All power can be
dangerous:
Direct

or alternating,
you, socket to me.
Plugged in and the grid

is humming,
this electricity,
molecule-deep desire:

particular friction, a charge
strong enough to stop
a heart

or start it
again; volt, re-volt--
I shudder, I stutter, I start

to life. I've got my ion
you, copper-top,
so watch how you

conduct yourself. ...

LOVE the wordplay, wish I'd written this!

And my response ...

Poem Artwork

they say lightning
never strikes

the same place
twice.  'They'

don't know.  i
reach towards

the Heavens,
hoping to be

connected once
more.  you knock

me off my feet ---
i melt.  i  b u r n.

thunderstruck.
touch me.  again.  

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (11/19)
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 Reviews of "Thunderstruck"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
High voltage stuff! As a former copper top now turned silver, I can attest that metallurgy dictates silver as the better conductor. Thus when lightning does strike the second time, the connection will knock you straight on your cheeks. Patrick
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
Karla great poem thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
Great response to the original, Karla. To every action there is an equal and opposite reaction; MORE than equal in this case! This orchestrated heat needs no conductor. Meltdown accomplished! xx
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 20, 2010
En-lightening Karla! How many coulombs flow from your creative mind in a day. With each beautiful strike the timpani reverberates, titillates this reader's imagination and arrhythmic heartbeat. Very clever, very creative and an upbeat read my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on November 20, 2010
love struck, thunder struck, time for lotsa luck. xx
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 20, 2010
Splendid poem Karla,inspired by another fantastic poem!That's what I love about poetry! Bless you!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 20, 2010
Great write Karla and I wouldn't want to see it strike once let alone twice.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
I agree that such an electric wordplay is fun!

Axilea
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
A great response, Karla. Love the photo, too. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Electrifying is the right word. Well done, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
wow-this is great!
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
dynamite karla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Electrifying! Well done, Karla, and the piccy is fantastic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
Nice comeback, Karla.
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