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color game (a rant)
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there's a whole lotta disatisfaction,
there's a whole lotta folk reactin',
you got your diff'rent people--other factions,
they get together, it's a distraction,

they're killin' each other, blood's on the streets,
someone dissed another, called her a cheat,
someone kills a cop that was on the beat,
someone's on death row...home's made of concrete,

someone's in the gutter, they're stoned on crack,
her father's dead...he was shot in the back,
there was that awful terrorist attack,
this world's screwed up--it has gone out of whack,

the rich steal from the poor, every day,
the young abuse the old in ev'ry way,
christians are becoming such easy prey,
hate is quickly becoming mankind's trait,

forgettin' they're human beings, awright,
why does it matter if they're black or white?
why hate each other and why must they fight?
we are all brothers--stand up now--unite,

it's long past time we stop layin' the blame,
the old excuses have become so lame,
we are God's children...we are all the same,
it's time we stop playin' the color game!!!!
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'nuff said. :(

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 Reviews of "color game (a rant)"
Reviewed by ZaKiYa Online
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
BRAVO Bravo


thanks for always being true

Reviewed by Rochell (Ro Deezy) Hart (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2003
Loved your work! Keep it up!
Check out my debut spoken word & hip hop CD at www.cdbaby.com/rochelldhart

Reviewed on December 5, 2002
So true! Keep writting these rants!
Hugz
Your Friend
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
nuff said is right girlfriend! I really like this!
josie

Reviewed by Rita Putatunda (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
got me tappin'--- zappin' muh mind!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Well done. Have you set it to a beat?

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
Excellent and I agree!Well done Karla!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
in total agreement...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
Nuff Said and Said Very Well. I appreciate this write, wonderful, Karla!

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
yes, great rant girl!

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
Yes!! You Go Girl!
My kids are impressed!

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2002
Great rant, Karla. :) Very good.

Reviewed on December 2, 2002
STANDING OVATION!! Li'l Bow Wow, Watch out..Karla Dee is on the rap scene!! Great rap, Karla! (I never knew you could rap...) love, your rap fan of a sister, your twin, karen lynn. RAP ON, GURL!! :)


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