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are you satisfied?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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are you satisfied
and happy with yourself
why do you have to hide
identify yourself

more of my friends leaving
what do you want of me
i'm tired of the grieving
why can't you leave them be

these are MY friends you hurt
the ones you drive away
at pain, you're the expert
nicest thing i can say

do you want me to go
go the way of my friends
i don't want to leave--NO!!
this madness has to end

are you satisfied
as they leave, one by one
who will be left? tears slide
as author's den's undone

(c) karla dorman, 2003
--------------------------------------------------------------------
to all those who have left, or are
contemplating leaving...

i wish you would come back, i wish
you would change your mind...

o, how i miss you...your words, and
especially your encouragement...

don't ever give up writing...this
is what this person (or persons)
wants to see happen...

i am not going to give them the
satisfaction...


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 Reviews of "are you satisfied?"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 16, 2012
Karla, scanning stuff posted from ages past I found this one from 2003...I'm hoping the troubles you described have been repaired.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
well said Karla, in the end good wins out over bad

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Bad reviews wouldn't be enough to make me want to leave, but my friends leave is... I have to give this a lot of thought

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
**Tears**... Stay strong, yes, my talented friend. Always.
(((((((((((((Karla)))))))))))))

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Excellent Karla..I love your strength here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
People like you are the reason why I hang in there,I miss them too very much but we cannot let the one who started all this wreck it for us if we go they win.
I wont let that happen.
Best wishes always
from
kay.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Someone has started again? I'm not leaving. I got hurt is the reson I haven't been around.
Your friend.....................Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Good on you Karla...we need to know who this babboon is.....and we must stand together!!

Take care okay!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Good for you Karla. Don't let the creep win. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
He/she like this. The Mata Hari of AuthorsDen is lovimg all the wailing and sobbing and . . . pain. You're allowing Mata Hari to succeed.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Rock on, Karla, Together we stand united.....THEY fall!
Michael

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Karla, We must stand together! Otherwise they win! Great write! ~SH~

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
What a sad day this is! This is what the idiots wanted to do in the first place - to breakup authorsden; and we are all allowing this to happen. *sigh*

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
(((karla)))

i am NOT giving in, but i am doing this for my physical and emotional health. so many of my friends being hurt; i can't take much more of this.

what a heartwrenching write, and such a sad place authorsden is turning out to be!

god be with authorsden and all its den-zens; y'all are in my prayers and thoughts!

(((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <


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