i feel desire increase i feel the sensation rise there is a need for release you can see it glowing in my eyes
you want it as much as i we lose ourselves in a kiss you breathe out a gentle sigh you let me know you want more than this
i touch you...there, there, and there i feel the excitement mount you want my touch, everywhere i understand, make each second count
you take your clothes off, i, mine and we lay down on the rug the feel of you, so divine it's more powerful than any drug
suddenly, i have to stop there is a slight problem, see what i thought is desire is the sudden urge: I HAVE TO PEE > > > > > > > > > >>>>>GOTCHA!!!!<<<<<
*grins*
(C) karla dorman, 2003
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Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
To quote David E. Kelly's Gramma; "You Stinka!!!!"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Lol.
Oh no !!!!!!
And what happened afterwards? Tell us?
Nico
It just ain't fair... all entranced was I, reading on, and all of a sudden... splash ;0)! LOL! Great finale, dearest friend!
{{{{{{{Karla}}}}}}
~Alexandra~
LOL!! I first read your message and then your poem...so I knew what was going oooon!!
Gotcha back!!
"The little witch walk down the lane in a grocery store and saw some gherkins in a bottle...and she sai...mommy look...here is some ninja peenies in a bottle for you!!
Little girl run to her mommy...she called....Alexie has a peenie like a peanut.....how do you know that tinky...did you see it.....no I tasted it and it was salty
Oh you little stinker!! What a cute and adorable poem! I agree with Mr. Blackwell though, if I had a pillow nearby, I would probably HIT you with it too!!!!! ARGH!!!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
Karla, if I had a pillow nearby, I'd whack you one! LOL
for a while, i thought this was a takeoff on the loretta lynn and conway twitty song, "lead me on"; but you caught me completely by surprise! oh, this is too funny! LOL enjoyed this terrific and wacky write; you are too much! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your (bamboozled) twin, karen lynn. :P
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Oh no !!!!!!
And what happened afterwards? Tell us?
Nico
God Bless
~Michelle~
hugs
Jenni
A great write.....you tricky lil' thing...
Loved it.....ty, Dani
~Jackie~
In Spirit,
Bear
Taylor
You certainly got me going on this one, now I will have to, well, uh, er, 'scuse me, gotta pee too, LOL! Loved it, so funny! ED
{{{{{{{Karla}}}}}}
~Alexandra~
Love
~Chrissie xx
Gotcha back!!
"The little witch walk down the lane in a grocery store and saw some gherkins in a bottle...and she sai...mommy look...here is some ninja peenies in a bottle for you!!
Little girl run to her mommy...she called....Alexie has a peenie like a peanut.....how do you know that tinky...did you see it.....no I tasted it and it was salty
LOL!! Take five!!
Love Tinka