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A Magical Fairytale Then
by Debra Faulconer Baker → (All Poetry by Debra Faulconer Baker)
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Thy breath blowing against the light fluffy down...the thistle seeds dance through the air...Our magical fairytale...

 



Gently I pick a light fluffy down


Blowing gently thy breath against it


The thistle seeds dance through the air


I'm thinking of you


My Dear Sweet Grandmother


Remembering


Your telling me a long time ago


Make a wish my Darling


Blow and your dreams will come true


I realize now it was a magical fairytale then


Between us


If only it were real


I would gently blow thy breath against it


Waiting for the sun to set


For that is a moment I remember best


Your walking back from the meadow


Behind you a beautiful sunset


Copyright 2007


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 Reviews of "A Magical Fairytale Then"
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Applause!
You write from the soul of your heart. Thank you for this work.
Best regards,
Chris

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
This is so beautifully written, Laura. A sweetness mingled with sadness flows from it. A lovely grandmother memory to share with us. I never knew either of my grandparents, so I enjoy them through writers like you. Thank you, precious friend.

God Bless
Love always
Lena

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

"A Magical Fairytale Then"
Debra this poem is breathtakingly beautiful!
The words used causes one to conjure up the images of a Grandmother figure walking just as you described as the sun glistens radiately around and behind...causing a somewhat halo to appear around her.

Magnificent giving away to heartfelt memories to each reader of perhaps their own Grandmother!
Thank you,
From the Heart of an Arist

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on April 16, 2007
a lovely and enchanting write...and a beautiful dedication to a loved one.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
Well Debra perhaps your wish came true even though you thought you were wishing for somthing altogether different. Grandparents are special and to have memories of time like this one to last a lifetime is indeed what the very value of life is about.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
Such endearing images and sentiments, Debra. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
What a wonderful write dear friend, you penned a beautiful reflection that took me back many years...I too loved spending time with my grandmother, I called her Mamaw, she was like a second mother to me. Beautifully written!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

I have enjoyed the reading of the magical lines of this magnificent composition... "A Magical Fairytale Then" ia a picture of blissful time of wonders and dreams.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
As Aleja said, Beautiful.
Rusty

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Ah! If only it was real, can you imagine??? Good write, enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
This one brought tears to my eyes...reminding me of my grandmother too~ I miss her old fashion ways and stories...but most of all~
her love!
Enjoyed this beautiful touching poem!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed on April 14, 2007
This is just simply beautiful.


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