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The Poor Old Moon
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The cat’s tail are swaying...Then there goes my imagination...As if a cat’s tail could speak...

*The wind blows with intensity* I glance out the bay window The cat’s tail are swaying I can almost imagine A wee voice speaking out Quit that please Then there goes my imagination As if a cat’s tail could speak The sky is darkening The tide coming in Bring instead waves of fury Pouncing against the sand Shifting it I guess Yet still I can catch a glimpse The poor Old Moon In and out As the dark clouds Move steady in the north’s direction Wait there I whisper to the Old Moon Soon the storm will pass The bay will calm So as you may shine a bit tonight Above the still waters Copyright 2011

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Reviews of "The Poor Old Moon"

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on February 25, 2011

Debra, It's amazing how the imagination can be triggered by the most unusual things. For you, it was the cat's tail that triggered this adorable write, with such vivid imagery. Nicely done indeed!
A rabbit triggered my imagination to write Caged:Where Most Husbands Should Be...for a while! :)

God Bless,
Hugs,
Lena

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 22, 2011

A quality of dreaminess in these verses.
Amor

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 22, 2011

You painted a vivid picture with your wonderful words.

George

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2011

Lovely writing sweet lady sure have missed you...Hugsss

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 19, 2011

Marvelous writing, a little whimsical and magical all in one.
fee

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