im a little lost as to what the wishing is...
is it wishing that your dreams would be different?
that the ravens wouldnt be such vultures?
dreams are the weirdest things.
i rarely remember mine unles theyre majorly extreme.
id think about adding a little punctuation to this piece as i think it would add to the power of the imagery... you have some very dark, powerful and gloomy imagery in here which makes my heart sink...
if my dreams were going to be this scary i think i would simply refuse to sleep XD
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is it wishing that your dreams would be different?
that the ravens wouldnt be such vultures?
dreams are the weirdest things.
i rarely remember mine unles theyre majorly extreme.
id think about adding a little punctuation to this piece as i think it would add to the power of the imagery... you have some very dark, powerful and gloomy imagery in here which makes my heart sink...
if my dreams were going to be this scary i think i would simply refuse to sleep XD