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The Fag
by Randall Davis Barfield → (All Poetry by Randall Davis Barfield)
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We were young addicts, though we didn't know it. We knew we could quit whenever we wanted.

It hooked us.
Some in high school,
Others in college like me.
We were young addicts
Though we didn’t
Actually know it. Besides,
It helped us to study, gave
Us some sophiscation.
We knew we could quit
Whenever we wanted.
We’d seen all those
Splendid vintage movies
Starring Bogie, Dietrich,
Wayne, Gardner, and many
Others doing it. It kept
Out hands busy but, unfor-
Tunately, not productive.
Blowing the rings was
Amusing both to ourselves
And to on-lookers. Sometimes
We’d place bets. Panicking
When we realized we were
Almost out, hence running
To the store to re-supply
In 20 degree winter weather
Wasn’t amusing. Nonetheless,
Hooked was hooked, which
Contradicted a bit our belief
That we could quit on the
Slightest whim. We saw the
World was changing cause
Our kids were being taught
In school against such an
Evil practice, nay, health
Assassin. One day, when
There’s no more drinking
And smoking, what will
People do at parties, we
Wondered. We could go
Back to dancing like at
Parties in westerns. Sans
Fiddlers, of course. If I
Have a deathbed, though,
One that cannot be reversed,
I’ll take some more drags.
Some shots, too, without the
Dreary worry of calories or
Damage to vitals or loss of
Brain cells. Is life a blast
Or isn’t it?



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Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2005
wonderful talent you share

Reviewed on September 29, 2005
Well, if only I knew what you mean by "fag", then I could give you a better review.

The way "fag" means to me is "queer", but I have a hard time relating that word to this poem.

Okay...*scratching my head*...I'm having a dumb moment...I guess.

Well, I can only say to you that this is well-written, and tells a story - like it is a fragment of your biography.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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