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A Pip
by Randall Davis Barfield → (All Poetry by Randall Davis Barfield)
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Bonnie shows us this week how important friendship is as a poem topic. Here's a little ditty from me.

 

Even I have some friends
Believe it or not
And must take care of the ship
Lest it veer, go off course,
And leave me only a pip.

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 Reviews of "A Pip"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
You are easily to call a friend. Your writings draw people to you. Take care of yourself and don't let your ship stray so far. It might come upon an iceberg. You are lovingly read each day and have many friends. This is superb and touching to me.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
Well done sweet man...Hugsssssss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
very clever!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Wow! I don't think Gladys Knight worried as much for her Pips!

Smile>
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
You make the important point of ,caring for your friends!
Well said!
ET

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Enjoyed the cadence and structure, but what's a pip?

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Making friends is the easy part, being a friend requires a little more work, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
We wouldn't want you to be a pip... enjoy your friends and life.

Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Enjoyed your thoughts Randall.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Very cute write, keep your hands on the wheel or where ever they are, not sure what a pip is, but it doesn't sound good to be left with. Love, bonnie

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Very sweet and cute ditty you did pen this day! Cheers, Deborah

Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Excellent piece. love this one Randall

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
I am the captain of my own ship. I will seek to steer her through the least treacherous waters. For I owe allegiance to my crew, to see that it is so. I am the captain, my friends in life my crew. What kind of fool would not see to the safety and health of his crew? Yep! Great poem. Not at all piposterous. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed on April 23, 2008
LOL, too cute, Randall!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.


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