I like economy in a poem and each word in its time I like economy in a speech a meeting and a quiche! A short kiss can too be sweet Don't you remember Jesus' feet?
Yes. A poem should just speak its statement, and an expression, without too much emphasis. It should be subtle and yet be understand. Avoid the extra spicing of the adjectives, they cause the readers hiccups when read, and they kill the poem.
Yes, I remember the story and this is simply wonderful. I love it when a person has the ability to use few words to create a vivid image. Great work. Janet
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2001
Good message with economy.
Thanks for your kind comments. Gregg
This programmed, self-paced lesson focuses exclusively on the use of postpostions (ga and (w)o) with grammatical objects in the Japanese language without wavering or getting off track in the labyrinth of Japanese syntax and other grammatical issues.
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I concur with the below reviewers all the way.
Less words are enjoyable but accepts other offerings.
It is entertaining and challenging using less.
Have a fun time,
~Gwendolyn
Regis
Happy New Year Randy!!!!!
Love from your poet friend,
Sandie May Angel :o)
Brett
Thanks for your kind comments. Gregg