Often during falls chill when things change; green goes to gray, the air is crisper, the rain, a precursor to the coming snow, life for a leaf soon hangs by a bare thread, unsure of how much time it has until it is snatched from its perch, made ready for a fall from grace. It happens one day when one season makes way for another; the right pressure, followed by the loneliest sound a leaf can hear…it is like a lover leaving with those forever and final steps that it happens. From the top of this mighty maple down its hardened outstretched arms to float with little lift from the fall air to a cold crisp bed of grass then whoosh a gust of wind lifts the leaf, elevating to new heights of hoping, praying, looking skyward with the dreams that it would somehow be reattached to the now barren limb…rain falls what can this little leaf do to survive…pushed up by the wind pressed down by the rain, soon, the rain wins this battle and the leaf is left to soak in cold heartless baths of …a drain…where it circles, wrinkles, circles, folds in unnatural shapes and circles until it is gone to a nowhere hole never more to be the greatest leaf of them all.
"Whatever happened to forever?" Dan, from nature's mystery and dance you have created a wonderful song of reason. There is the raw grip of finality, embraced with love and compassion. I truly enjoyed this marvelous rendering my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
I love this. There is much to garner from your verses; symbolic and meaningful. Also, this reminds me of a poem that I posted here quite some time ago. It is entitled, "Beauty" and you vividly brought back the meaning and the sentiments behind why I wrote it. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace to you,
oh but that's not the end.... it now becomes food for a worm, who then excretes it to become fertilizer for the next crop of leaves and the cycle continues.... evermore.
I absolutely love this!! The images are just wonderful, TD... and yes I find myself grieving for that leaf... wanting it to return.
Excellent work! hugs, SPP
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Nice write Dan, Thanks Dick
Be always safe,
Karen
This is a splendid poem.
It moves, it haunts, it challenges
and stays long long after in the heart.
This I save.
Kudos!
John
Hugs to you,
CJ
Blessings ... richard
Blessings,
Christine
Excellent work! hugs, SPP
Bravo Dan,
Marcia