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Keeping the Dark Spaces-Revised
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Something I found from way back and cleaned up a little. It is still a work in progress-dlj

 Keeping the Dark Spaces-Revised
© 2007-2013
Dan Johnson

I like dark spaces
flying in and out of my
two pounds plus
of jumbling grayness

From wide cast shadows
to neon lights advertising;
acceptance of body, soul, spirit
rejection of denial of all human rights,
and
repentance from what?


I yearn for the day
when critics light grows dim
while dark places
expand within,
after all you see,
that’s where
I find refuge
in those quiet,
dark and peaceful spaces.


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 Reviews of "Keeping the Dark Spaces-Revised"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 19, 2013
Yes. Some kinds of "dark" are beneficial; certainly not all. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 1, 2013
I hear ya, Dan!!! This is simply great!

Anna

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on February 1, 2013
So much of my creativity comes from my "Lonely Room". The darkness will always be there, we just have to have the courage to explore and exploit it. "When those critics light grows dim, while dark places expand within", maybe the darkness that they experience will lead to some much needed enlightenment....

duke

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on January 31, 2013
An unusual poem, DJ. I guess people can find peace in

in those quiet,
dark and peaceful spaces.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 31, 2013
I much prefer getting out in the light of day. It's a whole lot healthier. We'll have enough darkness when we go to the stars

Ron

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 31, 2013
LIKE THE MOON AND STARS...THE LIGHT WITHIN IS ALWAYS SO MUCH BRIGHTER IN THE DARK. WELL DONE, DL, THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on January 31, 2013
Aye... for it makes no matter what others think...
it is only to fulfill themselves... for they only
delight in tearing others asunder which actually they
see within them-self... Therefore, they should bugger off eh?

Repentance bah, balderdash... be who you are and say what you
feel we are but mortal man on a path walking our own life and
we learn along the way... love ourselves...

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on January 30, 2013
Coming from the darkness one can
truly appreciate enlightenment!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on January 30, 2013
oh me too, this is an excellent offering
never mind on the critics, lets check out
this old vault...

Candle Lanterns Of The Soul
Vickie

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 30, 2013
Well you might not realize how much I relate to this but then maybe you do after all... loved everything about this, my friend...especialy the honesty
hugs and cheers
SPP

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on January 30, 2013
Sometimes darkness is necessary for growth, a seed must grow in the ground(dark space)...yet one day it becomes a beautiful plant.

Reviewed on January 30, 2013
DAN... Like all pairs of Dichotomy... good-evil, right-wrong, up-down, etc...
Darkness helps us to appreciate Light.
"LET THERE BE DARK... AND THERE WAS DARK"!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 30, 2013
I hear you, DL, my problem with those dark places over the years is that, although they were dark, they were anything but peaceful.


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