More Madness on the Bus (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 24, 2013

i love these 'bus observations'...you have a really neat thing goin' here...uniquely 'dan'

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 6, 2013

I Know Right?!! all our technology is
segregating us from having physical contact
with each other of the Best Kind!! Looking
into each others eyes...

I See You Because I Am Looking At You
Vickie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on February 11, 2013

Clever visual presentation...a particularly powerful poem!
Blessings,
Christine xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 10, 2013

Good point well made, Dan. Hopefully the bus driver is not doing the same thing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 9, 2013

Thank God that they are passengers - Today, I see far too many people who are driving cars, trucks, and even buses doing the same damned thing.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 8, 2013

They are multitasking. Multitaskers can read, have sex (vicariously) and find their bus stop without ever having to smile, say hello, or chat with fellow bus riders. ;-) As such they are superior people who don't need relationships, just sex and where to get off.

You are a master observer of modern life. Keep up the good work.

Ron

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on February 8, 2013

D.L.,

The world is changing, people are afraid to look up, they may have to face the world and they'd rather hide behind their cell phones, etc. Very perceptive write!

Blessings to you,
Linda+

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 8, 2013

I see people, especially younger ones, walking into walls, posts, etc. It's downright hilarious! People don't talk anymore, nor do they write...sadly its the way of the future...will humans forget how to speak one day? Nicely done, Dan...

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 8, 2013

yes, Dan, well observed..i like these bus pieces,
they're smart, relevant and have cut and thrust

john

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

Touche *Dan* Loved, Loved,
Loved it..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

I love these 'bus' pieces of yours.. but this one I adore.. and that ending? perfect!! Thank you for always making me look forward to the next one...
hugs and cheers,
SPP

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

Wao! This is so true, I like how you described this growing epidemic so elegantly, we have become a society unaware, seems like voodoo to me lol, getting the life sucked out of us and we don't even know it. How do you even say hello? no interaction, it is very scary.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

Never mind our heads down, we've had our heads up our a***s for much too long, and I'm afraid we don't have the grit to pull it out . . .

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

Good question, Dan.

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

They can't if they are looking down...
Sad state of affairs... unity and comradeship sadly
has become "me-isms" it's where we have lost the fight so
to speak in this world... from whence it used to be many decades
ago...

I am such a social creature I would disturb everyone LOL
Although I do savor my privacy, but in public I do become the
extrovert :)

Time for people to wake up and see what they are truly missing!
Humankind! Before we are left with the insensitivity of the robot
world and lose what we once had...

Excellent perception and notice of all around you...

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

Must be they intend to become coal miners, or maybe work in silver, diamonds or copper. Or maybe they expect to dig deeper.