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Tantric-Revised
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Originally written in 2010...now revised
Tantric-Revised Dan Johnson © June, 2010 25March 2013 You look into me and I to you Our intimate mutual Pleasure is tantric. Our moments together can last beyond all time, endure raging winds, and last longer than quick but unfulfilling acts of simple, sexual gratification. This is how we build our time of sexual pleasure with each other. Our eyes are wide open, you see blue sky in me I see peaceful green fields through you. Our eyes never close when we are together…with each other, only seeing love. Our breaths are in perfect unison. When I inhale, you exhale at the same time. We breathe warm, welcoming winds of love. We become one in love, we become sexually orchestrated. We mirror each other in our marmoreal finish, we see as one, we touch as one. Together, moment by moment we inch closer and closer, and with each movement; an unstoppable energy ignites within us, like nothing ever has. When we touch each other, when we fold into each other, when we whisper little things that heighten our senses, we draw still closer thinking this is the moment, this is the time, This is the time we must explode, but we wait, wait, wait! We breathe, we touch, we begin again and build on those same kindling acts that spark fires that never extinguish, and we love all night long, gazing, breathing, touching, and building a love...that is tantric.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 3, 2013

passion and sensuality in every line, Dan;
it takes first-hand knowledge of intimacy to write
like this and first-hand understanding of love

john

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on March 30, 2013

Truly Ecstasy!! Well Done!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 26, 2013

Makes me feel at one, all cuddly inside, and ready to explode. ;-)

Love is a contradiction.

Ron

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Excellent poetry Don
Enjoyed

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

very well don beautiful expressions
budd

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 25, 2013

patience of the art form...beautifully expressed

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Poem of many voices, ways of weaving together
many strands of people creative, business, spiritual,
and ....ordinary lives,....to make them joyful and ecstatic.
Poem that teaches us all the simple lesson.....when
we approach life with a relaxed body, peaceful mind,
and open heart...we are able to access ecstatic states
and incorporate them into our daily lives.
Experience greater success, health, deeper meaningful
relationships with community, planet, and better
understanding of our basic nature as a human being.
With warm regards Isabella.

Reviewed by George Carroll

We have yet to know how to extinguish the power love has on us mortals. Explosive poetry.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

AMEN! and dang yummy! I love this.. and I beleive I remember the original..))
Nice nice work, TD!
Cheers and love,
SPP

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Yes it most definitely is tantric, with all the build-up, the passion, the looks, sighs and licks and fondles. There is nothing more we can possibly do to make the sexual act more enjoyable except follow instructions herein and "wait, wait, wait!" until the time is right for both to give relief in the form of exploding passion. Damn straight, buddy.