Five solders marching in line
Each step in syn-co-pa-ted design
High steps low steps dressed so fine, surely,
A military tribute; a heavenly sign
Marching 1,2,3.4…no war this time.
...a hypnotic effect of your 5 liner's poem, Dan
brings the tuneful rhythm of a marching soldiers
and strikes an inspiring melody of hope...a happy
experience of both...the verse and sound of a new
World without...a war.
Thank you for sharing.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Regis
there will be no more wars ever Dan...
Love and Light
Lily
Great piece....
Diana.....
love ya
SPP
Totally enjoyed and appreciated its message ...
~jeanne
brings the tuneful rhythm of a marching soldiers
and strikes an inspiring melody of hope...a happy
experience of both...the verse and sound of a new
World without...a war.
Thank you for sharing.
out of Iraq and afgan
Peace be with you
William
Ron
Ssndie
Short n sweet n to the point !