I see stormy skies in my distant dream its raindrops of kisses I'm showering you with my stormy clouds of lightning bliss our thunderous claps of orgasmic cries it's stormy wishes for a cloudy day when the sun comes out you'll be the light and I'll be your sunbeam shining into your dreams
I'll hold you in my stormy arms and fold you into my sunny charms upon your lips I'll place raindrops of kisses it's stormy wishes for a warm twilight sun setting in glorious colors The hues of my love paint our embrace
I see stars arise as we lie awakening for a peek at the moon to shine brightly I'll be your blue streak flying across the sky We'll be astral travelers in a galactic milky way
I will guide you into my stormy dream We'll look into the horizon and see our love alive flashing lightning bliss crying thundereous claps of orgasmic wishes for raindrops of kisses
You touch my romantic heart, Dale. The last poem I reviewed, I remarked about your ability to convey emotion without metaphor. Well, for this review I'll praise you for your brilliant use of metaphor. You are a man of many moods and every poem you write is an example.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2005
I really like the spectacular imagery you've painted her CJ.
Wooooo! This is the kind of electrical storm that just beckons you outside to thoroughly embrace and run screaming into whilst getting totally drenched to the skin! Can just see streaming wet faces, hair clinging, raindrops following the contours of lips and noses... luvin it! This paints nothin but a rainbow for me, Dale :)) Guess it suits my loud personality... A kettle-drum write, I reckon!! TY Kate xx
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Peace,
Joseph
So beautiful. It has breathe.
The second stanza, man dazed me.
Thank you.
Emeka
Very romantic, especially the last
stanza!
Beautiful sensual write Dale!
Love,
Eileen
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Happy Writing,
Victoria Taylor MUrray
Geez this is truly a gem!!
Shhhhhhhhh don't tell anyone....but this made me cry!!
I got the nickname of "Alwayscry" already!!
Love Tinky