come closer, Sue (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2005

Nice hot poem!

You're something else, It's great. Lucky Sue.

Tracey

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Dale, a wonderful and sensual write...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Hot hot write my friend....excellent!!!!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

This is hot. Sue, doesn't need that wake up after all. Smiles.
I dig this.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

Superbly sensual love it Dale

Paul;-}

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

wow!!

You Naughty old Pinky minded Thingy!!

Shaking my head...did I just read Dale????!!

Love TinkSo!!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

whew, i'd better be careful what i ask for...i won't get much sleep tonight...at least not restful sleep...but boy i will dream, baby, be sure of that

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

My goodness Spring has surely sprung between you two.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

you're quite good at erotica ... keep it up ;)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Hot romantic write. I am sure Sue will love this!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Beautifully sensual and lovely, this was excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Hotly romantice and sensuous. Great love offering. Thanks for sharing it, Dale. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

That's not fair, Sue's having all the fun!;-) But hey, who better to have it with than you Dale;-) Great erotica with a capital G&E!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

I just knew it! If this is a response to Sue Hess's call for steamy poetry, than I can't believe I have beaten her over here! But, on the other hand, I predicted that her message board and inbox would be flooded, so she's probably having another lie down to recover a bit before the next session! Talk about red rag to a bull!! And this is a fittingly cajoling and toreador-ish write that gets more than the little red cape fluttering... and I'm not talking Little Red Riding Hood here! Neat and tight, Dale. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Well,now! You have just melted my monitor! Whew, steamy, excellent write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

This is a.m. meltdown. Erotic with a capital 'E'. A tender and passionate seduction...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

There is nothing quite like whisppering sweet nothings to the one we adore.